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Come North My Love

These decayed cities must hold us no longer. Let us flee this mass of conformity. The jaded concrete has bound us too long. Come north with me, my love. Bring your warm clothes and precious smile. I will brush the snow from your shoulders, and keep our fires strong during long nights. Come north with me, my love. Can we sneak away to a private hot spring? Lie down in soft glades beyond boundaries? Let’s watch sunsets behind dazzling peaks. Come north with me, my love. I will purchase a boat and serenade you over water. We will buy a house overlooking verdant mountains. Will you let me plant you an orchard? Come north with me, my love. Our children will be free of urban poison. Meadows team with butterfly amusements. Pine forests they will wander in serenity. Come north with me, my love. Please my love…….. Into the unknown…….. Hand in hand……… We should go………

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/23/2011 5:17:00 PM
Passionate write with nice promises to the loved one, Michael
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Date: 5/23/2011 1:26:00 PM
I was dying to read this ! wow ! I really love this poem ! Thank u so much for this lovely poem. I wish to learn a lot from you.....can u teach me? Ur greatest fan !
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Red Fiery
Date: 5/23/2011 3:15:00 PM
I AGREE WITH YOU. THE LOVE AND LONGING FOR SOMEONE'' WINKS'' TEACHES US TO WRITE BEAUTIFUL POEMS..
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Michael Wayne
Date: 5/23/2011 1:37:00 PM
Fall in love with someone you can't see everyday. Your heart will ache and be filled with poetry!

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