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Come My Beauty

 
wandering the art gallery I am feeling blissful and soon, I find myself among the 18th Century art I could just fall into these gilded frames and scenes and become part of the paintings the beauty often tragic and beautifully painted the colors chosen sublime and deep I see a man within a portrait frame following me with his eyes and he whispers- come my beauty and I stand staring at him for the longest time his dark eyes are deep fathomless pools and I am truly enthralled with him I could love the man within this frame I want to stroke his flowing raven hair kiss his full lips that beckon for me to come then, he reaches out and I hold tight his seeking hand then, within a gilded frame at the art gallery this handsome raven haired man is kissing my ruby lips many stop and remark at the reality of the art ___________________ August 05, 2022 Poetry/Imagism/come my beauty Copyright Protected, ID 08-1478-121-05 All Rights Reserved, 2022, Constance La France Written for the Premiere contest, A Brian Strand Premiere Choice sponsor, Brian Strand, Judged 08/07/2022 Fifth Place
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Kauffman Avatar
August 18, 2022 at 9:46 AM
Delightful Constance! The ultimate artful experience - at one with the soul of the painting! Very clever! Congratulations on your win!
La France Avatar
August 19, 2022 at 6:39 AM
Sam, thank you so much for the compliment, comment and congratulations ~
Seeker Avatar
August 7, 2022 at 10:29 PM
Who needs company in this dreamy reverie? Congrats on your win, with this romantic write, Constance!
La France Avatar
August 8, 2022 at 9:59 AM
Seeker, thank you so much for the compliment and congrats, blessings ~Constance
Kendrick Avatar
August 7, 2022 at 1:27 PM
Congratulations on this imaginative winning work. Way to go. I was compelled to continue reading. Sara
La France Avatar
August 7, 2022 at 2:15 PM
Sara, thank you so much for the congratulations, compliment and comment, blessings ~Constance
Canerdy Avatar
August 7, 2022 at 10:40 AM
CONGRATS on your win with this very descriptive piece, Constance! Janice
La France Avatar
August 7, 2022 at 12:03 PM
Janice, thank you so much for the congrats and the compliment, blessings ~Constance
Hankins Avatar
August 5, 2022 at 7:10 PM
A marvelous experience, Constance. And, that is precisely the response the artist wanted. It was probably a self-portrait, you think?
La France Avatar
August 7, 2022 at 2:11 AM
Milt, thank you so much for the compliment, perhaps the artist wanted to painting to be so real, perhaps a self portrait it is always a marvelous experience for me at the art gallery, I just get lost in the art, blessings ~Constance
Dietrich Avatar
August 5, 2022 at 4:38 PM
oooh la la. Making that picture come to life. AWESOME, Constance!
La France Avatar
August 7, 2022 at 2:12 AM
Andrea, thank you so much for the comment and compliment, blessings ~Constance
Rodrigues Avatar
August 5, 2022 at 3:53 PM
With no distractions, with time to take all the nuances in, when reality was in vogue, when photographs were in the future then a dream man comes forth from the past to make your pulse flutter. Love it, Connie!
La France Avatar
August 5, 2022 at 4:00 PM
Kim, thank you so much for the compliment and lovely comment, and exactly, in the quiet of the gallery my imagination gets all dreamy, blessings ~Constance
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