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Come My Beauty

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wandering the art gallery I am feeling blissful and soon, I find myself among the 18th Century art I could just fall into these gilded frames and scenes and become part of the paintings the beauty often tragic and beautifully painted the colors chosen sublime and deep I see a man within a portrait frame following me with his eyes and he whispers- come my beauty and I stand staring at him for the longest time his dark eyes are deep fathomless pools and I am truly enthralled with him I could love the man within this frame I want to stroke his flowing raven hair kiss his full lips that beckon for me to come then, he reaches out and I hold tight his seeking hand then, within a gilded frame at the art gallery this handsome raven haired man is kissing my ruby lips many stop and remark at the reality of the art ___________________ August 05, 2022 Poetry/Imagism/come my beauty Copyright Protected, ID 08-1478-121-05 All Rights Reserved, 2022, Constance La France Written for the Premiere contest, A Brian Strand Premiere Choice sponsor, Brian Strand, Judged 08/07/2022 Fifth Place

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 8/18/2022 9:46:00 AM

Delightful Constance! The ultimate artful experience - at one with the soul of the painting! Very clever! Congratulations on your win!

Constance La France
Date: 8/19/2022 6:39:00 AM

Sam, thank you so much for the compliment, comment and congratulations ~

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 8/7/2022 10:29:00 PM

Who needs company in this dreamy reverie? Congrats on your win, with this romantic write, Constance!

Constance La France
Date: 8/8/2022 9:59:00 AM

Seeker, thank you so much for the compliment and congrats, blessings ~Constance

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/7/2022 1:27:00 PM

Congratulations on this imaginative winning work. Way to go. I was compelled to continue reading. Sara

Constance La France
Date: 8/7/2022 2:15:00 PM

Sara, thank you so much for the congratulations, compliment and comment, blessings ~Constance

Janice Canerdy

Date: 8/7/2022 10:40:00 AM

CONGRATS on your win with this very descriptive piece, Constance! Janice

Constance La France
Date: 8/7/2022 12:03:00 PM

Janice, thank you so much for the congrats and the compliment, blessings ~Constance

L Milton Hankins

Date: 8/5/2022 7:10:00 PM

A marvelous experience, Constance. And, that is precisely the response the artist wanted. It was probably a self-portrait, you think?

Constance La France
Date: 8/7/2022 2:11:00 AM

Milt, thank you so much for the compliment, perhaps the artist wanted to painting to be so real, perhaps a self portrait it is always a marvelous experience for me at the art gallery, I just get lost in the art, blessings ~Constance

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/5/2022 4:38:00 PM

oooh la la. Making that picture come to life. AWESOME, Constance!

Constance La France
Date: 8/7/2022 2:12:00 AM

Andrea, thank you so much for the comment and compliment, blessings ~Constance

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/5/2022 3:53:00 PM

With no distractions, with time to take all the nuances in, when reality was in vogue, when photographs were in the future then a dream man comes forth from the past to make your pulse flutter. Love it, Connie!

Constance La France
Date: 8/5/2022 4:00:00 PM

Kim, thank you so much for the compliment and lovely comment, and exactly, in the quiet of the gallery my imagination gets all dreamy, blessings ~Constance