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son coming home black dress draped on bed will she survive mourning Dedicated to all the mothers who have lost a son to war.

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Date: 11/9/2014 8:03:00 AM
Wow! So very powerful and emotional.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/9/2014 11:32:00 AM
Thanks Monterey.
Date: 10/26/2014 4:31:00 AM
There could be nothing worse than to outlive your children. A heart wrenching powerful write.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/29/2014 3:06:00 PM
I agree, I hope neither of us is ever faced with such a loss.
Date: 10/19/2014 4:01:00 AM
Emotions my friend emotions ! That's what ur write has done! She has to be a brave one , like son like mother! Of course will survive!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/19/2014 5:32:00 AM
You too have answered Kayode's question. My heart goes out to them.
Date: 10/19/2014 1:13:00 AM
I pray she survives,what an emotional one.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/19/2014 5:31:00 AM
Mothers are made of strong stuff and somehow most of them find a way. Thanks for visiting Kayode.
Date: 10/18/2014 11:54:00 PM
War is never kind. I don't believe sad begins to describe the suffering of a mother who loses her son to combat... I've witnessed it at my friend's funeral. It's great that you wrote this!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/19/2014 5:29:00 AM
I remember, so sorry for your loss.
Date: 10/18/2014 12:24:00 PM
Oh, so sad. A mothers worst nightmare.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/19/2014 5:28:00 AM
So true. My mom told me you connected.
Date: 10/18/2014 12:02:00 PM
Oh Richard. This so heart wrenching. I cant image the pain...Wonderful work. BG
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/19/2014 5:26:00 AM
Thanks Barbara. ;0)
Date: 10/18/2014 11:23:00 AM
Richard....Richard...this is one of your best. OH...you said so much with these lines...the play on words...Oh, the pain of a mother having to wear black. You are a genius. Bless you for this dedication.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/19/2014 5:25:00 AM
This comment warms my heart Eileen, I am smiling! Hugs Rick.
Date: 10/18/2014 9:52:00 AM
ahhhh, sadness great sadness, so well expressed. Also you could play with the title and say Come Mourning
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/18/2014 9:56:00 AM
The last line was a play on the title, but I can see how it works your way as well.
Date: 10/18/2014 8:15:00 AM
Oh that is sad! :( very well said Richard you have pulled my heart with your questionku.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/18/2014 8:32:00 AM
Good morning, I am off to check out your site!
Date: 10/18/2014 8:14:00 AM
heartfelt weeping may god bless them on their journey
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liam mcdaid
Date: 10/18/2014 9:23:00 AM
god speaks in different pains of love through our works to open our eyes to the truth smiling
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/18/2014 8:30:00 AM
I read your poem this morning, shortly after writing this one. It almost felt like dejavu.
Date: 10/18/2014 7:22:00 AM
- Distressing ..... who is dead ..... hope no one close to you Richard - Well done Q-ku - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Sunshine Smile
Date: 10/18/2014 7:36:00 AM
- Oh .... that stuck -
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/18/2014 7:31:00 AM
Hi Anne Lise, an artistic expression not a personal experience.
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Sunshine Smile
Date: 10/18/2014 7:24:00 AM
-Sorry did not read the line below :) - Happy weekend !