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Come Into My Web

She hated men Hated everything about them Bordering on the pathological Hated the way they touched her Hated the way they used her She even hated taking their dirty money She did like killing them though Watching their power slowly ebb away It was the ultimate ****** Definitely so much better than sex She didn’t like the spurters Underwear was so damn expensive But she was beginning to perfect her technique Directing the flow away from her Learned strangely enough from a surgeon He would have been proud of her It was her breasts that caught his eye The rest his imagination took care of He had never done it blindfold before It sure felt so sensual God, he could feel the explosion building up inside him She directed the open razor with total precision Marvelling as his body went into spasm God, the ****** was out of this world Definitely so much better than sex.

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Date: 10/4/2023 4:14:00 AM
Good Morning Paul. Hi. Well now, you truly know how to grab the attention of your reader with such clarity power and emotion. Yes, the emotive factor is ever present in its entirety beginning with the title. It was an honor turning to your entry and page. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. May today find you well. Blessings always (smile)
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Paul Bell
Date: 10/4/2023 9:18:00 AM
Girl to avoid on a Saturday night.
Date: 9/11/2023 2:25:00 PM
from one killer to another eh? "come into my web" shouldn't that be my line?
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Paul Bell
Date: 9/12/2023 2:19:00 AM
It is your line, just borrowed it for effect. lol
Date: 9/10/2023 10:15:00 AM
Ouch! you got right to the point, Paul.
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Date: 9/6/2023 2:11:00 PM
This one was weird to say the least. Sara
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Paul Bell
Date: 9/7/2023 2:30:00 AM
She was a bit of a weird girl.
Date: 9/4/2023 7:04:00 PM
The razor's edge...
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Paul Bell
Date: 9/5/2023 11:28:00 AM
was a bit
Date: 9/4/2023 12:33:00 PM
Have you just been watching that Antichrist movie by Lars Von trier Paul, I don’t know why but this one reminds me how it spirals into absolute insanity, maybe it’s because they never use names, just he and she, brilliant I enjoyed the funny unflinching way you presented this one, cheers David
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Paul Bell
Date: 9/5/2023 11:29:00 AM
I'll need to dig it out.
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David Kavanagh
Date: 9/4/2023 12:34:00 PM
Oh yeah the title is class too lol!

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