Come Into My Web

She hated men

Hated everything about them

Bordering on the pathological

Hated the way they touched her

Hated the way they used her

She even hated taking their dirty money

She did like killing them though

Watching their power slowly ebb away

It was the ultimate org*sm

Definitely so much better than sex

She didn’t like the spurters

Underwear was so damn expensive

But she was beginning to perfect her technique

Directing the flow away from her

Learned strangely enough from a surgeon

He would have been proud of her

It was her breasts that caught his eye

The rest his imagination took care of

He had never done it blindfold before

It sure felt so sensual

God, he could feel the explosion building up inside him

She directed the open razor with total precision

Marvelling as his body went into spasm

God, the org*sm was out of this world

Definitely so much better than sex.

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Date: 10/4/2023 4:14:00 AM
Good Morning Paul. Hi. Well now, you truly know how to grab the attention of your reader with such clarity power and emotion. Yes, the emotive factor is ever present in its entirety beginning with the title. It was an honor turning to your entry and page. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. May today find you well. Blessings always (smile)
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Paul Bell
Date: 10/4/2023 9:18:00 AM
Girl to avoid on a Saturday night.
Date: 9/11/2023 2:25:00 PM
from one killer to another eh? "come into my web" shouldn't that be my line?
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Paul Bell
Date: 9/12/2023 2:19:00 AM
It is your line, just borrowed it for effect. lol
Date: 9/10/2023 10:15:00 AM
Ouch! you got right to the point, Paul.
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Date: 9/6/2023 2:11:00 PM
This one was weird to say the least. Sara
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Paul Bell
Date: 9/7/2023 2:30:00 AM
She was a bit of a weird girl.
Date: 9/4/2023 7:04:00 PM
The razor's edge...
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Paul Bell
Date: 9/5/2023 11:28:00 AM
was a bit
Date: 9/4/2023 12:33:00 PM
Have you just been watching that Antichrist movie by Lars Von trier Paul, I don’t know why but this one reminds me how it spirals into absolute insanity, maybe it’s because they never use names, just he and she, brilliant I enjoyed the funny unflinching way you presented this one, cheers David
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Paul Bell
Date: 9/5/2023 11:29:00 AM
I'll need to dig it out.
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David Kavanagh
Date: 9/4/2023 12:34:00 PM
Oh yeah the title is class too lol!
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