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Come Darling and See

Come  Darling  and see
there’s sunlight in the
shadows
no wind in the lee
and under the tree
repose
Beside you and me
subliminal  the 
meadows

Yet  under my nose
scent of damask rose
so strong
like our afterglows
fading blush rush rose
Love song
togetherness flows
and in tomorrows
belong

Babbles rush along
whilst church bells ding dong
agree
We never seemed wrong
as soulmates belong
Look…See
they’re playing our song…
sentenced to lifelong
esprit

3/13/2023
Virelai

Copyright © Kim Rodrigues | Year Posted 2023

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Mahtab Bangalee Date: 3/15/2023 10:27:00 PM sweetly done; great to red Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 3/16/2023 7:39:00 AM Thanks, Mahtab!

Gershon Wolf Date: 3/15/2023 7:38:00 PM Sweeeeeeeeeeeeeetly sung, my friend! Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 3/16/2023 7:39:00 AM Thank you, my friend! :)

Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/14/2023 1:23:00 PM Pastoral scene and so romantic!! Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 3/14/2023 5:26:00 PM Thank you, Andrea!

Vijay Pandit Date: 3/14/2023 5:44:00 AM Beautiful poem, Kim. Don't know the form you used, but loved the tender voice. Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 3/14/2023 9:18:00 AM It is called a virelai :) Thank you, my friend!

Valsa George Date: 3/13/2023 8:11:00 PM Indeed so lovely ! Two blushing roses, emanating sweet scent like your love. Well done dear Kim. Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 3/14/2023 4:03:00 AM I appreciate that you, Valsa, always see deeply into my poetry and chosen pics. Hugs ~ Kim

Speaks Volumes Date: 3/13/2023 7:26:00 PM This is truly beautiful Kim, such feeling. Its a life long sentence that is welcomed. Best wishes. Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 3/14/2023 4:02:00 AM Thank you, Wendy! :)

Fin Chuuk Date: 3/13/2023 6:32:00 PM Oh my gosh, this is so romantic and beautiful, Kim. Gosh I want this to be me. Lol. I love it :) Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 3/13/2023 7:19:00 PM Lol…thank you so much, Fin! :)

Joe Dimino Date: 3/13/2023 9:37:00 AM Absolutely beautiful! Such a wonderfully romantic poem -- with stunning depth of expression. "We never seemed wrong as soulmates belong Look…See they’re playing our song… sentenced to lifelong esprit" Sooooo lovely! A FAVE Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 3/13/2023 9:52:00 AM Thank you so much, Joe! <3