Kim Rodrigues Poet Rhyme

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Come Darling and See

Come  Darling  and see
there’s sunlight in the
shadows
no wind in the lee
and under the tree
repose
Beside you and me
subliminal  the 
meadows

Yet  under my nose
scent of damask rose
so strong
like our afterglows
fading blush rush rose
Love song
togetherness flows
and in tomorrows
belong

Babbles rush along
whilst church bells ding dong
agree
We never seemed wrong
as soulmates belong
Look…See
they’re playing our song…
sentenced to lifelong
esprit

3/13/2023
Virelai

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Mahtab Bangalee March 15, 2023 at 10:27 PM sweetly done; great to red Kim Rodrigues March 16, 2023 at 7:39 AM Thanks, Mahtab!

Gershon Wolf March 15, 2023 at 7:38 PM Sweeeeeeeeeeeeeetly sung, my friend! Kim Rodrigues March 16, 2023 at 7:39 AM Thank you, my friend! :)

Andrea Dietrich March 14, 2023 at 1:23 PM Pastoral scene and so romantic!! Kim Rodrigues March 14, 2023 at 5:26 PM Thank you, Andrea!

Vijay Pandit March 14, 2023 at 5:44 AM Beautiful poem, Kim. Don't know the form you used, but loved the tender voice. Kim Rodrigues March 14, 2023 at 9:18 AM It is called a virelai :) Thank you, my friend!

Valsa George March 13, 2023 at 8:11 PM Indeed so lovely ! Two blushing roses, emanating sweet scent like your love. Well done dear Kim. Kim Rodrigues March 14, 2023 at 4:03 AM I appreciate that you, Valsa, always see deeply into my poetry and chosen pics. Hugs ~ Kim

Speaks Volumes March 13, 2023 at 7:26 PM This is truly beautiful Kim, such feeling. Its a life long sentence that is welcomed. Best wishes. Kim Rodrigues March 14, 2023 at 4:02 AM Thank you, Wendy! :)

Fin Chuuk March 13, 2023 at 6:32 PM Oh my gosh, this is so romantic and beautiful, Kim. Gosh I want this to be me. Lol. I love it :) Kim Rodrigues March 13, 2023 at 7:19 PM Lol…thank you so much, Fin! :)

Joseph P. DiMino March 13, 2023 at 9:37 AM Absolutely beautiful! Such a wonderfully romantic poem -- with stunning depth of expression. "We never seemed wrong as soulmates belong Look…See they’re playing our song… sentenced to lifelong esprit" Sooooo lovely! A FAVE Kim Rodrigues March 13, 2023 at 9:52 AM Thank you so much, Joe! <3