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Come Darling and See

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Come Darling and see there’s sunlight in the shadows no wind in the lee and under the tree repose Beside you and me subliminal the meadows Yet under my nose scent of damask rose so strong like our afterglows fading blush rush rose Love song togetherness flows and in tomorrows belong Babbles rush along whilst church bells ding dong agree We never seemed wrong as soulmates belong Look…See they’re playing our song… sentenced to lifelong esprit 3/13/2023 Virelai

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Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 3/15/2023 10:27:00 PM

sweetly done; great to red

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/16/2023 7:39:00 AM

Thanks, Mahtab!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/15/2023 7:38:00 PM

Sweeeeeeeeeeeeeetly sung, my friend!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/16/2023 7:39:00 AM

Thank you, my friend! :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/14/2023 1:23:00 PM

Pastoral scene and so romantic!!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/14/2023 5:26:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/14/2023 5:44:00 AM

Beautiful poem, Kim. Don't know the form you used, but loved the tender voice.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/14/2023 9:18:00 AM

It is called a virelai :) Thank you, my friend!

Valsa George

Date: 3/13/2023 8:11:00 PM

Indeed so lovely ! Two blushing roses, emanating sweet scent like your love. Well done dear Kim.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/14/2023 4:03:00 AM

I appreciate that you, Valsa, always see deeply into my poetry and chosen pics. Hugs ~ Kim

Speaks Volumes

Date: 3/13/2023 7:26:00 PM

This is truly beautiful Kim, such feeling. Its a life long sentence that is welcomed. Best wishes.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/14/2023 4:02:00 AM

Thank you, Wendy! :)

Fin Chuuk

Date: 3/13/2023 6:32:00 PM

Oh my gosh, this is so romantic and beautiful, Kim. Gosh I want this to be me. Lol. I love it :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/13/2023 7:19:00 PM

Lol…thank you so much, Fin! :)

Joe Dimino

Date: 3/13/2023 9:37:00 AM

Absolutely beautiful! Such a wonderfully romantic poem -- with stunning depth of expression. "We never seemed wrong as soulmates belong Look…See they’re playing our song… sentenced to lifelong esprit" Sooooo lovely! A FAVE

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/13/2023 9:52:00 AM

Thank you so much, Joe! <3