Come Back To Me Now

The grand wind blows as it hums along – 
This dark and grey velvet morning hardly risen.
 A well dressed classy drunk smears her finger across
 The doorman’s lips and whispers, “Don’t tell anyone.”
Stumbling along while someone else curses
 A garbage truck outside stops and reverses -
– beep – beep – beep.

 Standing there in her favorite long coat
 The desk clerk seems to gloat -
 Gloat over every marvelous thing she ever wanted.
 In this, the one day when she is thinner -
 Outside a siren shrieks repeating the tormented,
 Is she a saint or a sinner?

 Finally the quiet idles up there eternal
 Inside her blessed Penthouse suite.
 From her barred window she watches a crosswalk signal
 Still standing in her long winter coat.
 Across the alley she sees someone on a fire escape,
 As they wrap around and escape down the funnel.

 In the serenity of the street below a Cupid like boy 
 Salutes his mother.
 The mother stoops to pat him on his noggin.
 Then mommy makes a sculpture of her packages,
 As the boy salutes again.
 Up there behind her bars the drunk thinks she is different somehow.

 Taking off her coat she opens a book entitled “Value”
Finding a written sentence that ends with “come back to me now.”
She gives the legacy a second look
 And thinks how absolutely - positively - wondrously dear -
 If only she could believe what she read -

 And then she disappears.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 7/21/2014 10:57:00 AM
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Date: 7/18/2014 10:17:00 AM
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Date: 7/18/2014 8:53:00 PM
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