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Come Back To Me Now

The grand wind blows as it hums along – This dark and grey velvet morning hardly risen. A well dressed classy drunk smears her finger across The doorman’s lips and whispers, “Don’t tell anyone.” Stumbling along while someone else curses A garbage truck outside stops and reverses - – beep – beep – beep. Standing there in her favorite long coat The desk clerk seems to gloat - Gloat over every marvelous thing she ever wanted. In this, the one day when she is thinner - Outside a siren shrieks repeating the tormented, Is she a saint or a sinner? Finally the quiet idles up there eternal Inside her blessed Penthouse suite. From her barred window she watches a crosswalk signal Still standing in her long winter coat. Across the alley she sees someone on a fire escape, As they wrap around and escape down the funnel. In the serenity of the street below a Cupid like boy Salutes his mother. The mother stoops to pat him on his noggin. Then mommy makes a sculpture of her packages, As the boy salutes again. Up there behind her bars the drunk thinks she is different somehow. Taking off her coat she opens a book entitled “Value” Finding a written sentence that ends with “come back to me now.” She gives the legacy a second look And thinks how absolutely - positively - wondrously dear - If only she could believe what she read - And then she disappears.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 7/21/2014 10:57:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Jim :) - I choose your first great written free verse - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/18/2014 10:17:00 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup, Jim. Well done!!! I am glad you discovered this nice community of writers and hope you enjoy the site. Read the work of other poet's and comment if you find something you like; many poets will return the favor. Over time you will get to "know" some of us. You are welcome to visit my page anytime. Enjoy!
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Date: 7/18/2014 8:53:00 PM
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Date: 7/15/2014 3:35:00 PM
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