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Date Written:2/23/2026 ~ "Come And See" ~ Sponsored by: Edward Ibeh 

Come And See

Come and see, the big bright red and pink bee. She is sitting on a flower of yellow with glee, eating crackers with warm brie. Look the angelic butterfly is on one knee, is she making a plea? Come and see, the orange grasshopper is pouring rose tea. For you and for me, in China flowered cups under the oak tree. This fun dream I do not want to flee, but I really need to pee.
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Etgen-Baker Avatar
March 6, 2026 at 6:01 PM
grateful for this fun monorhyme :-)
Goldsmith Avatar
March 7, 2026 at 8:25 AM
Thank You for stopping over to read/write. Glad you enjoyed my fun "Come And See" work. If you see the red/pink bee or orange grasshopper say HI for me. Hahaha!!!! This one was a ton of fun to bring to life. Enjoy your fun day writing away............
George Avatar
February 27, 2026 at 12:30 AM
Enjoyed this beautiful poem with monorhyme. Your fun write is much appreciated.
Goldsmith Avatar
February 28, 2026 at 7:37 AM
Thank You for stopping over to read/write. Glad you enjoyed my fun "Come And See" work. If you see the red/pink bee or orange grasshopper say HI for me. Hahaha!!!! Enjoy your fun day writing away............
Jones Avatar
February 24, 2026 at 8:32 AM
Lol! Delightful Paula! I love it! I’m not going to enter my first Come and See write. I think he will say it’s too religious. I’ll try again.
Goldsmith Avatar
February 24, 2026 at 12:39 PM
Thank You for stopping over to read/write. Glad you found my fun "Come And See" to be, Delightful and you love it. Guess I was just writing Fun here... If you see the red/pink bee or orange grasshopper say HI for me. Hahaha!!!! Enjoy your fun day writing away............
Rodrigues Avatar
February 24, 2026 at 4:05 AM
A cute and wild dream! Do you flee the dream or the writing with imagination? I often have to go but hate to leave my proverbial pen ;) Hugs
Goldsmith Avatar
February 24, 2026 at 12:37 PM
Thank You for stopping over to read/write. Glad you found my fun "Come And See" to be, A cute and wild dream. Flee the dream, never. Always writing with imagination. Sometimes my pen gets carried away writing. Hahaha!!! If you see the red/pink bee or orange grasshopper say HI for me. Hahaha!!!! Enjoy your fun day writing away............
Kendrick Avatar
February 23, 2026 at 1:13 PM
Creative work coming from a very vivid dream. Way to go. Sara K
Goldsmith Avatar
February 24, 2026 at 12:34 PM
Thank You for stopping over to read/write. Glad you found my fun "Come And See" to be, Creative work. If you see the red/pink bee or orange grasshopper say HI for me. Hahaha!!!! Enjoy your fun day writing away............
Goldsmith Avatar
February 23, 2026 at 12:47 PM
"Come And See" ~ Date Written:2/23/2026 ~ Written By Human Poet.....
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