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Come With Me My Love - the Egg Timer Style

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~Come With Me My Love~ ( Egg Timer ) Come with me my love We'll dance away Neath the moon All night Long Long All night Neath the moon We'll dance away Come with me my love And hold me so tight Give me a kiss Two three four I want More More I want Two three four Give me a kiss And hold me so tight Come with me Darling And hold my hand always walk With me Love Love With me Always walk And hold my hand Come with me Darling. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2016 May.31.2017 “Kindness is a language which the deaf can hear and the blind can see.” - Mark Twain ~ Author's Notes: The "Egg Timer" is a poetry form or style created by Erich J. Goller.

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Adeniji Toluwalope Gideon

Date: 5/31/2017 5:16:00 PM

I see creativity crying aloud, Dorian. A 7, without doubt.

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 5/31/2017 9:21:00 PM

Thank you ever so kindly Adeniji, for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my love poem.And for the fantastic 7:)Deeply appreciated all :))Wishing you a very lovely day!In his light God bless you!:)D

Chris Green

Date: 5/31/2017 5:00:00 PM

This was beautiful, one of the best poems in this form I have seen. Wonderfully done my friend.

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 5/31/2017 9:16:00 PM

Hi Chris!:)Thank you ever so kindly, for stopping by again and commenting so beautifully here on my love poem. I'm so happy that you liked this one Chris:)I deeply appreciate it all my friend:)) Wishing you a very lovely day!In His light God bless you always!:))D