Combatant Instant Telegram

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heartbeat hammering not looking back at treason carried by the wind 2/16/2016 Poetry Contest: Instant Telegram - Sponsored by: Nathan D.

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/17/2016 9:08:00 PM

This is one brilliant haiku Eve! I hope to see it a top winner. #7

Paul Callus

Date: 2/17/2016 2:14:00 PM

I like the unique creativity of this haiku, Eve. It is suggestive and makes the reader delve deeper into the subject. gl in the contest. // hugs.......paul

Casarah Nance

Date: 2/17/2016 7:11:00 AM

Powerful to ride on, I enjoyed your haiku Eve!

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 2/17/2016 3:34:00 AM

Excellent Haiku, dear Eve. Good luck!

Brian Davey

Date: 2/17/2016 2:47:00 AM

can envision the whole scene perfectly, very nice Haiku and good luck in the contest