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A form of poetry created by poet Robert Keim in 2008. It is a 50-line poem of
short phrases and images. The "Blitz" poem is well-named, as the fifty short
lines are read in rapid-fire fashion. “The form really relies on sound and
rapid "flow." ~Rob Keim.
Here are the rules:
Line 1 should be one short phrase or image (like “build a boat”)
Line 2 should be another short phrase or image using the same first word as the
first word in Line 1 (something like “build a house”)
Lines 3 and 4 should be short phrases or images using the last word of Line 2
as their first words (so Line 3 might be “house for sale” and Line 4 might be
“house for rent”)
Lines 5 and 6 should be short phrases or images using the last word of Line 4
as their first words, and so on until you’ve made it through 48 lines
Line 49 should be the last word of Line 48
Line 50 should be the last word of Line 47
The title of the poem should be three words long and follow this format: (first
word of Line 3) (preposition or conjunction) (first word of line 47)
There should be no punctuation, except for an ellipses after the final two words
in lines 49 & 50.

Art is abstract Art thrives with colours Colours brighten faded coral Colours highlight black Black skies with silver stars Black opal gemstones Gemstones like amethyst Gemstones of vivid ruby Ruby roses and crimson thorns Ruby as precious as emeralds Emerald stalks of yellow daisies Emerald and velvet aurora Aurora Borealis in hints of pink Aurora Australis in tones of turquoise Turquoise morpho butterflies Turquoise waves on sands of gold Gold rays of orb in sapphire sky Gold crown with Indian jewels Jewels that sparkle like red diamonds Jewels unique like taaffeite Taaffeite glimmers in mauve Taaffeite shimmers in lavender Lavender blooms in lilac buds Lavender can help you to sleep Sleep brings ebony nightmares Sleep brings dreams of ivory Ivory are a grey elephant's tusks Ivory are the keys on pianos Pianos are made from pine Pianos can be stained in brown Brown bark covered in green moss Brown is compost for soil Soil supports olive herbs Soil weaves rainbow roots Roots of amber sweet pea Roots nourished from plain rain Rain brings charcoal clouds Rain flourishes fields of barley Barley has an earthly hue Barley crops bloom in beige Beige looks a bit like magnolia Beige is a little vanilla Vanilla has a lovely scent Vanilla can be a dull personality Personality should be like orange Personality is portrayed in poetry Poetry is a pigment of creativity Poetry is a vibrant palette of love Love... Creativity...

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Date: 2/26/2024 2:10:00 AM
This is new to me. And I love how you weaved each line with colourful imagery that blows the mind. A fave for me.
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Date: 1/21/2024 2:51:00 PM
Awesome example. I think I get it now
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Date: 1/12/2024 11:22:00 AM
What a fun challenge, SO! Always love to try something new! Blessings and gratitude!
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Date: 1/10/2024 3:28:00 PM
Never knew about this poetic form - another gem added to my learning experience. Your poems are so creative, each and every form just comes alive with your artistic pen. Hope to try - travelling for coming two months - don't want to miss wonderful poetry from you and many other poets. Best wishes ~
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Date: 1/9/2024 9:54:00 AM
What an invigorating "blitz" through a kaleidoscope of colour's, Silent One! I tell my art students we are meant to be creative with color... It's a visual language instintly interpreted, in nanoseconds, by our brain's ability to recognize millions of colours in an instant. Each colour's Poetic name giving us its personality in our minds eye, ready to be expressed as a pigment of creativity, uniquely human. "Poetry is a vibrant palette of love" Yes, indeed.
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Date: 1/9/2024 9:57:00 AM
(Would love to try this form of poetry sometime.)
Date: 1/9/2024 5:41:00 AM
Wow, spectacular penning, Silent One. A big FAVE. Have a grand Tuesday. All the best. ~
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Date: 1/9/2024 5:40:00 AM
Well written Silent One. Thanks for sharing :)
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Date: 1/8/2024 10:46:00 PM
A poem painted in colors and studded with gems. Although I am not at all familiar with this form, from the way you have composed it, I feel that the outcome is excellent. Its close affinity to Nature makes it excellent ! "Personality is portrayed in poetry/ Poetry is a pigment of creativity" Perfect conclusion. The words used are relatively simple and less ornate unlike your usual writes. Still there is so much beauty and flow for this poem. Sorry, due to some travel, I can't read many poems.
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Date: 1/8/2024 1:37:00 PM
This dramatic 'Blitz' poem and its short emphatic lines are vibrantly expressed within an array of magnificent colours and use of the name of jewels like sapphire, turquoise, ivory, whilst expressing components of mother Earth, green moss, rainbow roots ' Brown is compost for soil'. Truly 'Personality is portrayed in poetry, Poetry is a pigment of creativity'. - Love this 50 line creative example of Robert Kleim's form of poetry - exquisitely written SO my friend. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 1/8/2024 12:27:00 PM
Very complicated. LOL..It would be hard to keep all that straight. LOL..Thanks for sharing your talent with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K
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Date: 1/8/2024 11:18:00 AM
Aww such a creative expression once again.. I am feeling pumped to write a blitz too again after like 3 years. I remember you taught this us at Insta Thank you so much for the learning experience. Though I failed twice at forming a clean pretty blitz I guess.. but totally enjoyed writing it then. In this one, I loved your use of colors, stones, gems, and all the aesthetic things, so poetic brother. You are just brilliant!
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Date: 1/8/2024 9:08:00 AM
Your poem, Silent One is the epitome of creativity! A whole world of colours, gems, and sparkling beauties! Your creative poetry blending with the wondrous nature elements and the enchanting music! What a wonderland! How blessed we are to read and relish in such "palette of Love" always a huge treat to read you.. My deepest regards and blessings.
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Date: 1/7/2024 11:29:00 PM
Colors galore. Loved the intrigue of the hues.
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Date: 1/7/2024 7:50:00 PM
Very deep musings... liked your blitz!
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Date: 1/7/2024 7:41:00 PM
Poetry reading...and it turned into a ballroom blitz! Creatively. Very nice, especially,"Beige looks a bit like magnolia Beige is a little vanilla Vanilla has a lovely scent Vanilla can be a dull personality Personality should be like orange Personality is portrayed in poetry Poetry is a pigment of creativity Poetry is a vibrant palette of love Love... Creativity..."
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Date: 1/7/2024 4:25:00 PM
You've woven a beautiful, unique tapestry, Silent One! Although I'm not familiar with this form of poetry, your creation fascinated me with its imagery, use of color, and flow making for a gentle read. The ending lines were perfect. I especially liked "Sleep brings ebony nightmares Sleep brings dreams of ivory. Am faving this one just because I think it's brilliant. have a great evening, Sara
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Date: 1/7/2024 2:21:00 PM
I love the colors and the beauty of this exquisite poem, which allowed me to visit many delightful scenes. A brilliant work, Silent One.
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Date: 1/7/2024 12:33:00 PM
I was not aware of this form but you seem to have exampled it perfectly! Terrific flow makes it so much fun to read! Happy Sunday Silent One!
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Date: 1/7/2024 11:48:00 AM
Wow! You master this form with beautiful color content and creativity! I love how the word choices are sharing similarities in word but with varying definitions or descriptions. All the wonderful ways your blitz drives train of thought are amazing! Wonderful writing and always a pleasure to read you Silent One. Hugs
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Date: 1/7/2024 8:23:00 AM
Dear, SO, your poem is a true masterpiece. The imagery you have skillfully created forms a captivating craft that deeply resonates with the emotions. I am struck by the subtle yet powerful impact it has, evoking feelings of gentle hope. Your use of light and glowing embers adds a touch of enchantment, to the overall brilliance of your work. I am drawn to the vividness you have achieved in the depiction of colors. Each line of your poem shines with its unique charm
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Date: 1/7/2024 7:50:00 AM
"Poetry is a pigment of creativity", Very nicely done Silent
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Date: 1/7/2024 7:30:00 AM
Imagery well done, Silent One, not a form I am good at.
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Date: 1/7/2024 6:02:00 AM
I like the passion of this form--its tone flow rides with vigor. Awesome, creative, SO.
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Date: 1/7/2024 4:07:00 AM
I learn something new every time i come on here with the various forms of Poetry. I honestly didn't know so many existed. So good to see that you are so well informed, dear S1, a true inspiration to many. Hugs
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Date: 1/7/2024 3:59:00 AM
Quite an array of imagery a collage that clings to the heart, if not the mind of me,lol appreciate your mind dear friend, :)
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