Notes About The Poem

A form of poetry created by poet Robert Keim in 2008. It is a 50-line poem of
short phrases and images. The "Blitz" poem is well-named, as the fifty short
lines are read in rapid-fire fashion. “The form really relies on sound and
rapid "flow." ~Rob Keim.
Here are the rules:
Line 1 should be one short phrase or image (like “build a boat”)
Line 2 should be another short phrase or image using the same first word as the
first word in Line 1 (something like “build a house”)
Lines 3 and 4 should be short phrases or images using the last word of Line 2
as their first words (so Line 3 might be “house for sale” and Line 4 might be
“house for rent”)
Lines 5 and 6 should be short phrases or images using the last word of Line 4
as their first words, and so on until you’ve made it through 48 lines
Line 49 should be the last word of Line 48
Line 50 should be the last word of Line 47
The title of the poem should be three words long and follow this format: (first
word of Line 3) (preposition or conjunction) (first word of line 47)
There should be no punctuation, except for an ellipses after the final two words
in lines 49 & 50.

Colours of Poetry

Art is abstract
Art thrives with colours
Colours brighten faded coral
Colours highlight black
Black skies with silver stars
Black opal gemstones
Gemstones like amethyst
Gemstones of vivid ruby
Ruby roses and crimson thorns
Ruby as precious as emeralds
Emerald stalks of yellow daisies
Emerald and velvet aurora
Aurora Borealis in hints of pink
Aurora Australis in tones of turquoise
Turquoise morpho butterflies
Turquoise waves on sands of gold
Gold rays of orb in sapphire sky
Gold crown with Indian jewels
Jewels that sparkle like red diamonds
Jewels unique like taaffeite
Taaffeite glimmers in mauve
Taaffeite shimmers in lavender
Lavender blooms in lilac buds
Lavender can help you to sleep
Sleep brings ebony nightmares
Sleep brings dreams of ivory
Ivory are a grey elephant's tusks
Ivory are the keys on pianos
Pianos are made from pine
Pianos can be stained in brown
Brown bark covered in green moss
Brown is compost for soil
Soil supports olive herbs
Soil weaves rainbow roots
Roots of amber sweet pea
Roots nourished from plain rain
Rain brings charcoal clouds
Rain flourishes fields of barley
Barley has an earthly hue
Barley crops bloom in beige
Beige looks a bit like magnolia
Beige is a little vanilla
Vanilla has a lovely scent
Vanilla can be a dull personality
Personality should be like orange
Personality is portrayed in poetry
Poetry is a pigment of creativity
Poetry is a vibrant palette of love
Love...
Creativity...
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Brul Avatar
February 26, 2024 at 2:10 AM
This is new to me. And I love how you weaved each line with colourful imagery that blows the mind. A fave for me.
Dietrich Avatar
January 21, 2024 at 2:51 PM
Awesome example. I think I get it now
Kauffman Avatar
January 12, 2024 at 11:22 AM
What a fun challenge, SO! Always love to try something new! Blessings and gratitude!
Ray Choudhury Avatar
January 10, 2024 at 3:28 PM
Never knew about this poetic form - another gem added to my learning experience. Your poems are so creative, each and every form just comes alive with your artistic pen. Hope to try - travelling for coming two months - don't want to miss wonderful poetry from you and many other poets. Best wishes ~
Marine Avatar
January 9, 2024 at 9:54 AM
What an invigorating "blitz" through a kaleidoscope of colour's, Silent One! I tell my art students we are meant to be creative with color... It's a visual language instintly interpreted, in nanoseconds, by our brain's ability to recognize millions of colours in an instant. Each colour's Poetic name giving us its personality in our minds eye, ready to be expressed as a pigment of creativity, uniquely human. "Poetry is a vibrant palette of love" Yes, indeed.
Marine Avatar
January 9, 2024 at 9:57 AM
(Would love to try this form of poetry sometime.)
Elliott Avatar
January 9, 2024 at 5:41 AM
Wow, spectacular penning, Silent One. A big FAVE. Have a grand Tuesday. All the best. ~
Sands Avatar
January 9, 2024 at 5:40 AM
Well written Silent One. Thanks for sharing :)
George Avatar
January 8, 2024 at 10:46 PM
A poem painted in colors and studded with gems. Although I am not at all familiar with this form, from the way you have composed it, I feel that the outcome is excellent. Its close affinity to Nature makes it excellent ! "Personality is portrayed in poetry/ Poetry is a pigment of creativity" Perfect conclusion. The words used are relatively simple and less ornate unlike your usual writes. Still there is so much beauty and flow for this poem. Sorry, due to some travel, I can't read many poems.
Proxenos Avatar
January 8, 2024 at 1:37 PM
This dramatic 'Blitz' poem and its short emphatic lines are vibrantly expressed within an array of magnificent colours and use of the name of jewels like sapphire, turquoise, ivory, whilst expressing components of mother Earth, green moss, rainbow roots ' Brown is compost for soil'. Truly 'Personality is portrayed in poetry, Poetry is a pigment of creativity'. - Love this 50 line creative example of Robert Kleim's form of poetry - exquisitely written SO my friend. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Kendrick Avatar
January 8, 2024 at 12:27 PM
Very complicated. LOL..It would be hard to keep all that straight. LOL..Thanks for sharing your talent with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K
Iqbal Avatar
January 8, 2024 at 11:18 AM
Aww such a creative expression once again.. I am feeling pumped to write a blitz too again after like 3 years. I remember you taught this us at Insta Thank you so much for the learning experience. Though I failed twice at forming a clean pretty blitz I guess.. but totally enjoyed writing it then. In this one, I loved your use of colors, stones, gems, and all the aesthetic things, so poetic brother. You are just brilliant!
Riabi Dziri Avatar
January 8, 2024 at 9:08 AM
Your poem, Silent One is the epitome of creativity! A whole world of colours, gems, and sparkling beauties! Your creative poetry blending with the wondrous nature elements and the enchanting music! What a wonderland! How blessed we are to read and relish in such "palette of Love" always a huge treat to read you.. My deepest regards and blessings.
Buhagiar Avatar
January 7, 2024 at 11:29 PM
Colors galore. Loved the intrigue of the hues.
Hind Avatar
January 7, 2024 at 7:50 PM
Very deep musings... liked your blitz!
Herrick Avatar
January 7, 2024 at 7:41 PM
Poetry reading...and it turned into a ballroom blitz! Creatively. Very nice, especially,"Beige looks a bit like magnolia Beige is a little vanilla Vanilla has a lovely scent Vanilla can be a dull personality Personality should be like orange Personality is portrayed in poetry Poetry is a pigment of creativity Poetry is a vibrant palette of love Love... Creativity..."
Buehler Avatar
January 7, 2024 at 2:21 PM
I love the colors and the beauty of this exquisite poem, which allowed me to visit many delightful scenes. A brilliant work, Silent One.
Gentile Avatar
January 7, 2024 at 12:33 PM
I was not aware of this form but you seem to have exampled it perfectly! Terrific flow makes it so much fun to read! Happy Sunday Silent One!
Jones Avatar
January 7, 2024 at 11:48 AM
Wow! You master this form with beautiful color content and creativity! I love how the word choices are sharing similarities in word but with varying definitions or descriptions. All the wonderful ways your blitz drives train of thought are amazing! Wonderful writing and always a pleasure to read you Silent One. Hugs
Poet Avatar
January 7, 2024 at 8:23 AM
Dear, SO, your poem is a true masterpiece. The imagery you have skillfully created forms a captivating craft that deeply resonates with the emotions. I am struck by the subtle yet powerful impact it has, evoking feelings of gentle hope. Your use of light and glowing embers adds a touch of enchantment, to the overall brilliance of your work. I am drawn to the vividness you have achieved in the depiction of colors. Each line of your poem shines with its unique charm
May Avatar
January 7, 2024 at 7:50 AM
"Poetry is a pigment of creativity", Very nicely done Silent
Roper Avatar
January 7, 2024 at 7:30 AM
Imagery well done, Silent One, not a form I am good at.
Pandit Avatar
January 7, 2024 at 6:02 AM
I like the passion of this form--its tone flow rides with vigor. Awesome, creative, SO.
Williams Avatar
January 7, 2024 at 4:07 AM
I learn something new every time i come on here with the various forms of Poetry. I honestly didn't know so many existed. So good to see that you are so well informed, dear S1, a true inspiration to many. Hugs
Rose  Avatar
January 7, 2024 at 3:59 AM
Quite an array of imagery a collage that clings to the heart, if not the mind of me,lol appreciate your mind dear friend, :)
Mcintosh Avatar
January 7, 2024 at 3:53 AM
As amazing as I've grown to expect when I listen to your poetry throwing its silent darts of gentle, hope, trembling sentences covered in light, glowing embers of wonderful. I love this and will always look forward to reading your whispers on the empty pages where masterpieces are created. God bless you always. love, Gina
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