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Was a pleasure collaborating wtih Becca Teagan.

My pen strives to flow, saturate virgin fibers crisp, cool and clean, desires to spread through virtuous threads with thoughts, reflections, colors from within - yet at any given time I’m tempted to resign; my thoughts are faded, my ink runs dry. When your mind is weary and words silently suppressed like an empty fountain your muse drains with scarcity - take my palette, let your artistry flow, Illuminating barren scripture. With you, my colors shine more richly, my ink flows to satisfy my need to touch, and be touched by beauty. Together we observe in clear definition as unblemished pages are no longer innocent. Silent One collaboration with Becca Teagan Collaborated 3 July 2017

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Date: 3/3/2018 11:35:00 AM
I love this, S O...and Becca. I actually cringed at the message in the illustration! I also love the last stanza particularly. One question: why "colours" in the title, and "colors" in the body of the piece?
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Silent One
Date: 3/3/2018 11:39:00 AM
Thats what happens when a Brit and an American do a collab haha.
Date: 2/27/2018 4:16:00 PM
Very intense poem, SO and Becca. Maturation of being is in the pen vine of this sweet cluster of joy. Visceral and cerebral poetry combined. Powerful innervisions drawn deep from the core. Splendid collab. Love and smiles
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Date: 2/26/2018 8:07:00 AM
what a great collab from two great poets...:)-lulooo
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Date: 2/26/2018 2:57:00 AM
My mouth just dropped open. Wow!
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Date: 2/25/2018 8:05:00 PM
The two of you together seems destined to make beautiful poetry ! Nicely done.....both of you !!
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Date: 2/25/2018 4:07:00 PM
Congrats to the both of you on such a colorful write...best wishes to you both
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Date: 2/22/2018 3:04:00 PM
Congratulations to both of you on POTD with this exceptional piece of poetry, a joy to read. :))
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Date: 2/21/2018 3:09:00 PM
Best Congratulations to Becca and Silent One on this rather extraordinary poem. I believe your elegant narrative here touches all of us who are actively involved in Ars Poetica. Superb Work my friends!! Cheers and Best, Gary
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Silent One
Date: 2/21/2018 3:31:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words Gary..
Date: 2/21/2018 10:53:00 AM
Congratulation for POTD and for this romantic poem... so vivid: saturate virgin fibers crisp, cool and clean and this too!: like an empty fountain your muse drains with scarcity and then the coming together in a song of unity and support! Nice write :)
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Silent One
Date: 2/21/2018 3:30:00 PM
Thank you Ingrid, you said it so poetically..
Date: 2/20/2018 4:58:00 PM
A great poem you two! Congratulations on POTD!
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Silent One
Date: 2/21/2018 5:40:00 AM
Thanks
Date: 2/20/2018 1:05:00 PM
Returning with congratulations Silent One and Becca for well deserved POTD honors.. ~Susan
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Silent One
Date: 2/21/2018 5:39:00 AM
Thanks
Date: 2/20/2018 12:32:00 PM
Colors of emotion....great collaboration Silent and Becca;-)
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Silent One
Date: 2/21/2018 5:39:00 AM
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Date: 2/20/2018 12:27:00 PM
Congrats!!! my friends on POTD...great colab...very impressive...stay in the light...^WW^
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Silent One
Date: 2/21/2018 5:39:00 AM
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Date: 2/20/2018 11:58:00 AM
Wow, this made POTD! I wonder why it didn't make POTD when I posted it on my page right after we wrote it in July ;)
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Becca Teagan
Date: 2/20/2018 9:12:00 PM
oh. See how much I pay attention to poems getting potd.
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Silent One
Date: 2/20/2018 3:17:00 PM
It did get POTD when you posted it...
Date: 2/20/2018 11:20:00 AM
Very good, you two. Congratulations!
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Silent One
Date: 2/20/2018 3:21:00 PM
Thanks.
Date: 2/20/2018 10:46:00 AM
Congratulations to you both on POTD. Tom.
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Silent One
Date: 2/21/2018 5:39:00 AM
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Date: 2/20/2018 8:26:00 AM
Not surprised, congratulations for POTD honors...
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Silent One
Date: 2/20/2018 9:33:00 AM
Thanks..
Date: 2/20/2018 6:57:00 AM
Impressive collaboration, are you sure you two are two people? ;) great stuff guys! Congrats on potd xomo x2
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Silent One
Date: 2/20/2018 9:33:00 AM
Thanks
Date: 2/20/2018 6:35:00 AM
Returning with congrats on POTD.
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Silent One
Date: 2/20/2018 9:33:00 AM
Thanks
Date: 2/20/2018 4:48:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD!!!
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Silent One
Date: 2/20/2018 9:34:00 AM
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Date: 2/20/2018 4:42:00 AM
- Congratulations on p.o.t.d., S.O. & Becca !!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Silent One
Date: 2/20/2018 9:34:00 AM
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Date: 2/19/2018 10:54:00 PM
Great poem! Really...I love it! So sensual and dramatic!
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Silent One
Date: 2/20/2018 9:34:00 AM
Thanks
Date: 2/19/2018 2:02:00 PM
- Thanks for reposting ... it's beautiful, S.O. & Becca :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Silent One
Date: 2/20/2018 9:35:00 AM
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Date: 2/19/2018 12:29:00 PM
Sounds like a lot in common. Well done you two...
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Silent One
Date: 2/20/2018 9:35:00 AM
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Date: 2/19/2018 12:09:00 AM
When two great minds come together, you get a perfect collaboration, you get a perfect poem. Si, and Becca you two work perfectly together and are completely in sync. This is indeed a fave for me....Maria
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Silent One
Date: 2/20/2018 9:35:00 AM
Thanks
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