Notes About The Poem

Was a pleasure collaborating wtih Becca Teagan.

Colours Collaboration With Becca Teagan

My pen strives to flow,
saturate virgin fibers
crisp, cool and clean, 
desires to spread
through virtuous threads 
with thoughts, reflections, 
colors from within -

yet at any given time 
I’m tempted to resign;
my thoughts are faded, 
my ink runs dry.  

When your mind is weary 
and words silently suppressed
like an empty fountain
your muse drains with scarcity -
take my palette,
let your artistry flow,
Illuminating barren scripture. 

With you, my colors shine
more richly, my ink flows 
to satisfy my need
to touch, and be touched 
by beauty. 

Together
we observe in clear definition
as unblemished pages 
are no longer innocent.

Silent One collaboration with Becca Teagan
Collaborated 3 July 2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Robinson Jr. Avatar
February 27, 2018 at 4:16 PM
Very intense poem, SO and Becca. Maturation of being is in the pen vine of this sweet cluster of joy. Visceral and cerebral poetry combined. Powerful innervisions drawn deep from the core. Splendid collab. Love and smiles
Scars Avatar
February 26, 2018 at 8:07 AM
what a great collab from two great poets...:)-lulooo
Murray Avatar
February 26, 2018 at 2:57 AM
My mouth just dropped open. Wow!
Richards Avatar
February 25, 2018 at 8:05 PM
The two of you together seems destined to make beautiful poetry ! Nicely done.....both of you !!
Tracy Avatar
February 25, 2018 at 4:07 PM
Congrats to the both of you on such a colorful write...best wishes to you both
Pett Avatar
February 22, 2018 at 3:04 PM
Congratulations to both of you on POTD with this exceptional piece of poetry, a joy to read. :))
Bateman Avatar
February 21, 2018 at 3:09 PM
Best Congratulations to Becca and Silent One on this rather extraordinary poem. I believe your elegant narrative here touches all of us who are actively involved in Ars Poetica. Superb Work my friends!! Cheers and Best, Gary
One Avatar
February 21, 2018 at 3:31 PM
Thank you for your kind words Gary..
Showalter Swift Avatar
February 21, 2018 at 10:53 AM
Congratulation for POTD and for this romantic poem... so vivid: saturate virgin fibers crisp, cool and clean and this too!: like an empty fountain your muse drains with scarcity and then the coming together in a song of unity and support! Nice write :)
One Avatar
February 21, 2018 at 3:30 PM
Thank you Ingrid, you said it so poetically..
Swartz Avatar
February 20, 2018 at 4:58 PM
A great poem you two! Congratulations on POTD!
One Avatar
February 21, 2018 at 5:40 AM
Thanks
Ashley Avatar
February 20, 2018 at 1:05 PM
Returning with congratulations Silent One and Becca for well deserved POTD honors.. ~Susan
One Avatar
February 21, 2018 at 5:39 AM
Thanks
O.J. Hunt Avatar
February 20, 2018 at 12:32 PM
Colors of emotion....great collaboration Silent and Becca;-)
One Avatar
February 21, 2018 at 5:39 AM
Thanks
Warrior Avatar
February 20, 2018 at 12:27 PM
Congrats!!! my friends on POTD...great colab...very impressive...stay in the light...^WW^
One Avatar
February 21, 2018 at 5:39 AM
Thanks
Teagan Avatar
February 20, 2018 at 11:58 AM
Wow, this made POTD! I wonder why it didn't make POTD when I posted it on my page right after we wrote it in July ;)
Teagan Avatar
February 20, 2018 at 9:12 PM
oh. See how much I pay attention to poems getting potd.
One Avatar
February 20, 2018 at 3:17 PM
It did get POTD when you posted it...
Wanter Avatar
February 20, 2018 at 11:20 AM
Very good, you two. Congratulations!
One Avatar
February 20, 2018 at 3:21 PM
Thanks.
Cunningham Avatar
February 20, 2018 at 10:46 AM
Congratulations to you both on POTD. Tom.
One Avatar
February 21, 2018 at 5:39 AM
Thanks
Smith Avatar
February 20, 2018 at 8:26 AM
Not surprised, congratulations for POTD honors...
One Avatar
February 20, 2018 at 9:33 AM
Thanks..
Pigeon Tart Avatar
February 20, 2018 at 6:57 AM
Impressive collaboration, are you sure you two are two people? ;) great stuff guys! Congrats on potd xomo x2
One Avatar
February 20, 2018 at 9:33 AM
Thanks
Pandit Avatar
February 20, 2018 at 6:35 AM
Returning with congrats on POTD.
One Avatar
February 20, 2018 at 9:33 AM
Thanks
S     Avatar
February 20, 2018 at 4:48 AM
Congratulations on POTD!!!
One Avatar
February 20, 2018 at 9:34 AM
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Andresen Avatar
February 20, 2018 at 4:42 AM
- Congratulations on p.o.t.d., S.O. & Becca !!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
One Avatar
February 20, 2018 at 9:34 AM
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Duet Avatar
February 19, 2018 at 10:54 PM
Great poem! Really...I love it! So sensual and dramatic!
One Avatar
February 20, 2018 at 9:34 AM
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Andresen Avatar
February 19, 2018 at 2:02 PM
- Thanks for reposting ... it's beautiful, S.O. & Becca :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
One Avatar
February 20, 2018 at 9:35 AM
Thanks
Smith Avatar
February 19, 2018 at 12:29 PM
Sounds like a lot in common. Well done you two...
One Avatar
February 20, 2018 at 9:35 AM
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Williams Avatar
February 19, 2018 at 12:09 AM
When two great minds come together, you get a perfect collaboration, you get a perfect poem. Si, and Becca you two work perfectly together and are completely in sync. This is indeed a fave for me....Maria
One Avatar
February 20, 2018 at 9:35 AM
Thanks
Teagan Avatar
February 18, 2018 at 10:16 PM
aw, you re-posted this :) I wouldn't have known if Andrea hadn't left me a comment about this on my last poem. Thanks for reposting, this one is kinda special for me.
One Avatar
February 20, 2018 at 9:35 AM
Good old Andrea, was a pleasure to collaborate Becca..
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