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Pretty Penny pockets persimmons for their orange meat tempts,
these oval jewels when ripe adore green lime and white plates.
Diospyros, divine fruit, ripens bagged upon her counter waiting.
Soon, she will release them, tease them, between white teeth.

These oval jewels when ripe adore green lime and white plates.
Penny's Master rules with fur lined lashes, seldom coming early.
Soon, she will release them, tease them, between white teeth
for his rat-ta-tap-tap at her garden gate has woken her late.

Penny's Master rules with fur lined lashes, seldom coming early.
The tannic taste of persimmon on his soft pink tongue abates
for his rat-ta-tap-tap at her garden gate has woken her late.
Their deserts gone down with red wine and camembert cheese.

The tannic taste of persimmon on his soft pink tongue abates,
Diospyros, divine fruit, ripens bagged upon her counter waiting ..
their deserts gone down like red wine and camembert cheese,
Pretty Penny pockets persimmons for their orange meat tempts.


8/6/12

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 8/8/2012 10:01:00 AM
steamy, juicy, obviously hell-bait....me loves it Deb hhaha...... good luck with the contest
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Date: 8/8/2012 8:15:00 AM
Wow, I see how Cyndi was inspired with this juicy pantoum to write of passion fruit. Hot, hot, hot...love and blessings :))
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Date: 8/7/2012 11:23:00 AM
soup mail
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Date: 8/7/2012 11:22:00 AM
:-) Like the changes! Especially tease! Hugs, Cyndi
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Date: 8/7/2012 9:04:00 AM
Sent ya soup mail, Temptress Divine. Talk about forbidden fruit. Gone down, huh? Hmmm, welcoming gate, maybe? Or the ultimate naughty, 'swinging' gate? Hugs, Dee
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Date: 8/6/2012 6:31:00 PM
This poem is good and so is the furit. My cousi had 5 acers here in Texas and had a lot of thoes trees. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla
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Date: 8/6/2012 11:57:00 AM
Well done on the pantoum form. I can taste and smell these fruit. Should do well in the contest.
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