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Colourfication

Colourfication In Navy suit, since he was ready for sail, she stood with vermillion on her head, Embellished with diamonds studded in gold, an ivory necklace embraced her neck. A bouquet of flowers in all hues of lilac, interlaced with beaming threads in olive, Lit her paling life, wiping glooms of charcoal, and tinged her beats glitter in subtle cerise. Longing embed as silver streaked her plaits, till every evanescent dawn of tangerine twilight. Written March 16th, 2016 For contest by Silent one

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Date: 3/28/2016 12:10:00 AM
Dr Upma, Congratulations on your awesome "Colourfication Win." ~LINDA~
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Date: 3/22/2016 7:55:00 PM
Hi Dr. Upma, congratulations on your win in the contest. I like the image your words did paint onto my mind's canvas. I enjoyed the read. Going into my faves....Vlad.
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Date: 3/21/2016 9:39:00 PM
Congratulations Doc.........colourful write...loved it.....
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Date: 3/16/2016 3:46:00 PM
I like this, Upma. But maybe you should change a few of the colors to the synonyms he gave us to use for the contest. For example, I don't think you were supposed to use words purple and black, but choose a synonym of those colors!
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 3/16/2016 11:23:00 PM
Thanks Andrea ... I just missed dear..
Date: 3/16/2016 10:36:00 AM
Dr. Upma, lovely poem and gl in the contest :)-luloo
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 3/16/2016 11:24:00 PM
Thank you Laura..
Date: 3/16/2016 8:34:00 AM
Upma, this is a beautiful write, very touching and I am loving it 7 ~
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 3/16/2016 11:24:00 PM
Thank you Broken..
Date: 3/16/2016 8:15:00 AM
Doc unless my interpretation is wrong this is talking about meeting and marrying your spouse. I think this is an exceptional enigmatic write. Very Pleasant and soft. Nice touch doc. Peace doc, if I'm wrong don't hurt me :):)
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 3/16/2016 11:24:00 PM
Thanks for your thoughtful words Daniel .. much appreciate n yes..

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