Colourfication

COLOURIFICATION
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Her sapphires seduced him beneath shadowed sheets. 
He craves her slender body beneath the crimson setting of the sun
in the far west and before their emerald dream peeks through
he whispers gently in her ear... “Let's make love sweetheart,
take me to your cultivated garden full of marigolds and carnations.”
Holding hands tight, he led her to the place where their first kiss
set off a desirous occurrence, leading two bodies into becoming one. 
Sweet miracles of violets and blossoms of lilies seemed to 
carry the essence of true infatuation. Captivated by her deep fawn eyes
and her delicate ivory skin, he senses her aspiration of making every 
touch valuable and impulsive. For she was his translucent amber jewel
and he was her magical titanium rock stabilizing the lust between
two hungry souls. Before the stars took to shining, and after the  
mountains revealed the sunset, they found true destiny within each other.
Blessed be the marriage between a gentle soul and a single tender touch.

Colors Used:
1. Amber  2. Titanium  3. Ivory  4. Violet  5. Emerald  6. Marigold  7. Carnation
8. Crimson  9. Fawn  10. Sapphires 


Date Written: March 11, 2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 3/22/2016 6:55:00 PM
Hi Luloo, Congratulations on your win in the contest. Beautiful sensual images do flow so gently across the page as your colours sing out a gentle rainbow of Love, allowing such wonderful soft images to cocoon themselves in the readers mind. An excellent write my friend. Your gentle words do bring forth a seven and this gem goes straight into my faves..,..MIKE.
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Date: 4/22/2016 9:15:00 PM
Mike..I apologize, I just saw this comment! many thanks even if its late! :)-luloo
Date: 3/22/2016 5:47:00 AM
Hi Laura. Congrats for your awesome poem's placement in the contest!!! ;-)
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Date: 3/19/2016 1:29:00 AM
Superb use of shades colouring d theme.....liked it...gl
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Date: 3/14/2016 1:39:00 PM
This is an awesome write, luloo-- the words hold the reader in tight as you read through the story you tell. I love the feeling of that eternal sensation it delivers between the partners, great job with this. Good luck in the contest!
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Date: 3/14/2016 5:34:00 PM
Thank you very much Sam..-luloo *smiles*
Date: 3/12/2016 7:33:00 AM
Ewwwey - sensual write - well done, LuLoo - it's early am, cup of coffee and this poem better suited for nighttime! Now I need to find Tim and kiss him - you did this! CayCay
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Date: 3/12/2016 10:44:00 AM
haha! You're so cute lady CayCay :) Thank you very much :)-luloo *hugs*
Date: 3/11/2016 8:12:00 PM
Great closing line. Wheewee! A little steamy in the old garden. Good job, Laura
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Date: 3/11/2016 8:29:00 PM
Thanks Charlie :)-luloo
Date: 3/11/2016 5:55:00 PM
Laura, oh so sensual and beautifully penned, romantic and well quite wonderful, a winner and I am loving it 7 ~
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Date: 3/11/2016 7:44:00 PM
Thank you Broken Wings..:)-luloo *hugs*
Date: 3/11/2016 5:00:00 PM
Zowie....this is so sensual yet dignified and elegant Luloo! It contains the class of yesteryear. Perfect for the contest. Love to read romantic poems like yours my friend. I hope to see this way at the top! #7
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Date: 3/11/2016 5:53:00 PM
Thank you sweet lady! -luloo *smiles*
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Date: 3/11/2016 5:52:00 PM
Date: 3/11/2016 1:14:00 PM
Excellent, Laura! Should do very well :)
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Date: 3/11/2016 2:05:00 PM
Thank you Laura :)-luloo
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