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Colour of Truth

Truth
spotless
pure beauty
lotus like heart
spontaneously unfurling petals.

Petals of heart once completely unfurled
no black spot there
lingering
divine
peace.




© kashinath karmakar( 10th July 2011)
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Copyright © Kash Poet | Year Posted 2011

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Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 7/21/2011 6:56:00 AM It is so hot here in Ohio the last few days and they say stay in if you can. Well I can and so I thought this would be a wonderful day to thank everyone for their kind comments on my poetry. So I say thank you to you for the kind words and for sharing your amazing poetry with us Kash. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Charlotte Puddifoot Date: 7/15/2011 4:15:00 PM congrats on your win in the contest with this unusual and spiritual take on the theme... Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 7/14/2011 8:10:00 PM Kash, I am happy to see you in the winners' circle with your elegant poem on white. Is it your fave color as well? Congratulations to you! Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 7/14/2011 2:02:00 PM Lotus always reminds me of water lilies! nice win Congrad's Light & Love Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 7/14/2011 7:33:00 AM My congratulations on this win in the contest of nette,kashinath Login to Reply

Michael J. Falotico Date: 7/14/2011 6:11:00 AM Congrats on this fine write and form my friend,.....Michael Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 7/14/2011 5:52:00 AM Congratulations for your win Kashinath in Nette's "Color My World" Contest. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Elaine George Date: 7/13/2011 10:12:00 PM Brilliant Tetractys, Kashinath. Many congrats on your SUPER WIN. Lainie Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 7/13/2011 3:52:00 PM Congrats Kash on your exciting win in color my world with this awesome write on color white as I luved it from the start my friend.. another wow.. Login to Reply

Charles Henderson Date: 7/13/2011 9:38:00 AM A very soothing piece Kashinath. Good luck in the contest. Login to Reply

Juanita Warden Date: 7/12/2011 11:22:00 PM very peaceful for me..great writing..good luck in the contest. Login to Reply

Cyndi Macmillan Date: 7/12/2011 4:53:00 AM I loved the placement of each word not only the words chosen. This is GOOD. I believe this should do very well in the contest. Thanks for your comments on my own poems. I finally have a minute to reply- my girl is still asleep. A miracle. :-) Hope inspiration tickles you today. Cyndi Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 7/12/2011 12:18:00 AM Never saw my doppelganger in Provo either. But a few people told me I looked just like her. One lady was a ticket taker at a movie theater and she called me some name that wasn't mine! Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 7/12/2011 12:17:00 AM yes, Kash, the doppelganger stories are all true. I never saw my husband's we just heard about him from the clerks at those hardware stores. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 7/11/2011 11:40:00 PM wow, another beauty and so easy to guess the color in this one. I am sure she will love it, Kash. Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 7/11/2011 1:52:00 PM Enjoyed reading this one..I like the form that you chose and the design that it made..Reads like a winner to me..Good luck..Your presence at my work was uplifting..Sara Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 7/11/2011 12:46:00 PM This is exquisite, Kash. I am still trying to resolve my nerve damage and that is why I haven't been on line much. I'm sure this will do very well in the contest. White is the symbol of purity. Hope you'll consider entering my contest as well. Wishing you success always. Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

James Foulk Date: 7/11/2011 11:15:00 AM a wonderful write, enjoyed reading it. Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 7/11/2011 9:28:00 AM hello, come visit; miss ya! :) hugggs Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 7/11/2011 8:37:00 AM Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry with us Kashinath. I enjoyed reading it this lovely morning. May you have a wonderful week and enjoy life to the fullest. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 7/11/2011 8:35:00 AM dynamically written Kashinath with beautiful visuals my friend.. white is a pure color with so much meaning as u have written luv.. good luck in the contest with this brilliance that shines... Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 7/10/2011 10:05:00 PM ohh, thanks for joining my kashi... beautiful; will relish this more come judging time! ...come visit! :) huggs, nette Login to Reply

Elizabeth Wesley Date: 7/10/2011 9:56:00 PM Your verse has a clean lovely feel to it. So enjoyed reading it dear Kash. Best of luck in the contest! Login to Reply