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Colour of My Heart

Since a child I have wandered and explored, the forest and all the meadows and streams; the spirit wind has been my great reward, my hair taken along with golden leaves. When, my soul is broken I walk in awe, of each found wild creature, flower and tree; been amazed by a sleek black birds wild caw, each bird in the forest sings just for me. Then, one day the spirits in the sky spoke, telling of my aboriginal roots; that I was as strong as the tallest oak, now, I can hear their endless drums and flutes. The forest is the colour of my heart, the colour of my voice, my words - all part. ________________________ November 30, 2018 Poetry/Sonnet/Colour Of My Heart Copyright Protected, ID 18-1090-019-01 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, Colour Of My Heart sponsor, John Hamilton Fifth Place

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Date: 12/18/2018 2:05:00 PM
Thank you ML for visiting with the beautiful and the congrats !!
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Date: 12/17/2018 7:42:00 PM
Beautifully done; congrats on your win.
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Constance La France
Date: 12/18/2018 2:05:00 PM
:-)
Date: 12/14/2018 9:53:00 AM
Thank you Andrea, John, Connie and Carolyn for those great comments and the congratulations, appreciate ~
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Date: 12/13/2018 7:00:00 PM
Fantastic poem and fantastic win, Constance. Congratulations.
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Constance La France
Date: 12/14/2018 9:51:00 AM
~.~
Date: 12/13/2018 2:39:00 PM
Constance, back to say congrats on your well deserved win. John
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Constance La France
Date: 12/14/2018 9:51:00 AM
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Date: 12/13/2018 2:27:00 PM
Wow Constance, I just adore this enthralling beauty! A real masterpiece from your pen and going into my Faves my friend! Congratulations on your deserving win! : ) xxoo
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Constance La France
Date: 12/14/2018 9:50:00 AM
xoxo and thanks for the fav !
Date: 12/13/2018 1:26:00 PM
I know I'e read this before, but don't see my comment here, so I want you to know how beautiful I think this poem is. I admire the way you appreciate nature, thinking each bird "sings just for you." If only everyone could see the importance of nature, perhaps we could better protect it. Congratulations on your win in John's contest! A fave for me. Hugs, Carolyn
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Constance La France
Date: 12/14/2018 9:48:00 AM
Hugs and thanks for the fav !
Date: 12/13/2018 1:20:00 PM
Congrats on another fine win, just what i was hoping for!
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Constance La France
Date: 12/14/2018 9:47:00 AM
John, thank you for the inspiration and for my placement ~
Date: 12/5/2018 10:03:00 AM
John, thanks for visiting with that lovely comment, appreciate ~
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Date: 12/4/2018 3:46:00 PM
Beautiful imagery in this sonnet, Constance, best of luck in the contest. John
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Constance La France
Date: 12/5/2018 10:02:00 AM
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Date: 12/1/2018 10:11:00 AM
Thanks Chris, Sand, Andrea, Victor and Becca for visiting my poem and for those great comments, appreciate ~
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Date: 12/1/2018 8:17:00 AM
This is just breathtaking, Dear Heart. you have such a gentle way with words. Hope you are doing well. ~Hugs~
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Constance La France
Date: 12/1/2018 10:05:00 AM
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Date: 11/30/2018 9:25:00 PM
wow, you did a gorgeous job of this, Constance. I never quite caught up here tonight, but oh well, at least I got two poems written. Lovely weekend to you!
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Constance La France
Date: 12/1/2018 10:06:00 AM
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Date: 11/30/2018 5:09:00 PM
if that were a 3d poster...i'd love to look around : )
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Constance La France
Date: 12/1/2018 10:06:00 AM
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Date: 11/30/2018 4:41:00 PM
Wow, that was gorgeous. The scenic expressions of your lines completely took me into the poem. This was really good. Best wishes in the contest.
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Constance La France
Date: 12/1/2018 10:09:00 AM
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