Colour Blindness - Miltonic Sonnet

Showcase of my favourite painted collection,               a
Piled up for years, eventually being inaugurated,         b
Without fail, what if colours were amalgamated ?         b
No one could ever unveil my apprehension,                  a
Heart pouncing, breaths endured expansion,                a
More and more to the colours as I concentrated,          b
My senses shivered and swiftly hibernated,                  b
My passion, my hobby could not be my profession !      a
Neutral to doctor's innocuous advice on colour,             c
Who proved out the reception on retina as deficient,     d
Creator himself had prejudiced me in chromacy,           e
Dreams of painting vibrant having lost all valour,          c 
As literary gained power, hues became munificent,        d
Enriched in colors, now could be a pen's supremacy !    e




Written  on 5/5/14
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Pallister Avatar
May 12, 2014 at 5:22 PM
Good command of language I enjoyed
Horne Avatar
May 5, 2014 at 9:59 AM
this is beautiful : )
A. Sharma Avatar
May 6, 2014 at 8:55 AM
Thnx for passing by Jack !
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