Colors of Love

Flipping albums, moments color and monochrome holding hands in parks, rolling in warm sands fifty green velvety wedded springs breezed by thousands orange west suns bade goodnight laying at the tremulous autumn of life clear blue skies in the window mock mottled skin crimson rose blooming in the pot hurts frail eyes the unbroken promise of love still shines in the silver of unkempt hair as she bends to tuck him in black of limpid eyes behind glasses as she slowly trims his nails. written 06/08/2016
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Hamilton Avatar
February 8, 2017 at 11:42 AM
Wonderful write Sara, 27/30 worthy of 4th place, congrats on a fine win!
Ashe Avatar
June 24, 2016 at 3:15 PM
Thank you for your visit and kind comments! Your "Colors of Love" also shows the true gestures and gentle caring that accompanies Love! Very visual and felt! :-)
Haight Avatar
June 10, 2016 at 8:10 PM
Beautiful and emotional, Sara. Congratulations on your placement in the 'colors of love' contest. Hugs, Sandra
Chansarkar Avatar
June 10, 2016 at 9:18 PM
Thanks a lot Sandra,loved your poem a lot!
Quigley Avatar
June 10, 2016 at 6:46 PM
Congrats!
Chansarkar Avatar
June 10, 2016 at 9:18 PM
Thanks Tom!
Andresen Avatar
June 10, 2016 at 4:56 PM
- Congratulations on your fifth place at your beautiful poem, Sara - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Chansarkar Avatar
June 10, 2016 at 9:23 PM
Thanks Anne-Lise, I loved your 'Heartbeats' too:)
Nance Avatar
June 10, 2016 at 4:35 PM
Wow, I just loved the love in this, it really did bring tears to my eyes! This was touching.
Chansarkar Avatar
June 10, 2016 at 9:21 PM
Thanks a lot for picking my poem,Casarah!
Devnath  Avatar
June 10, 2016 at 4:27 PM
Beautiful poem my lovely friend. Congrats on your win. Loved always, bl
Chansarkar Avatar
June 10, 2016 at 9:18 PM
Thanks a lot BL!
Dietrich Avatar
June 9, 2016 at 12:23 AM
this captured the deep emotions of love, Sara. Very nicely done.
Chansarkar Avatar
June 9, 2016 at 9:51 AM
Thanks Andrea!
Smith Avatar
June 8, 2016 at 1:11 PM
Beautifully done Sara...
Chansarkar Avatar
June 8, 2016 at 1:41 PM
Thanks for stopping by Charlie!
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