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Colors In the Sky

"Two doves in white flying, feathers glow beneath the morning's rainbow colors" —Charles Messina
COLORS IN THE SKY Resistance is fly, that is perceptive, sharp, a cataclysmic sight.* Take off your blinders. Look up with keen eyesight. White of your eyes bleed into the heavenly dye, bruising depression, releasing joy - the jettison of a halo rainbow, procession of flapping red, orange yellow & green, blue, indigo, violet waves. One dove can fall, the other saves. White of sin, covered in floaters and flashes, feathers torn. All against thee: blinding lightning, hyperbaric scorn. In a 4-G inverted dive, enmity strife. Luxurious light coats the wings, coaxes life. Hope abounds in resonance and rainbow-braves.** Departed one falls…wait…Resurrected one saves. Noah and his kin rebooted, three days out of the grave, quick as a flood recedes, all of us waiting, still misbehave. In mourning - will we savor his protection or invite dread? The colors in the sky, blue as a savior’s eyes, or red?
12/6/2022 Contest: COLORS IN THE SKY Sponsor: Mystic Rose Rose *fly - (adj) keen, artful **braves - (adj) making a fine show, colorful

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Date: 12/7/2022 12:33:00 PM
- Mixed with colors so beautifully ... hope the eyes are smiling and indigo blue ... good luck in the contest, Kim :) -
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/7/2022 1:05:00 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise! :)
Date: 12/6/2022 10:46:00 PM
I want to paint this "releasing joy - the jettison of a halo rainbow, procession of flapping red, orange yellow & green, blue, indigo, violet waves."
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/7/2022 8:34:00 AM
Ooh hope you do! Thank you so much, sweet Caren! :)
Date: 12/6/2022 9:07:00 PM
Take off your blinders and look keen. You will be able to see rainbow colors falling in line ! Your poem as always is so esoteric, Kim. I like the way you have ended your poem."The colors in the sky, blue as a savior’s eyes, or red?". At the last day of judgement, will our Savior's eyes glow in blue with love or spark in red with anger... ? A question we have to ponder.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/7/2022 8:34:00 AM
Thank you, Valsa! I appreciate you! :)
Date: 12/6/2022 8:21:00 PM
Very deep poetry, Kim, and unique too:)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/7/2022 8:35:00 AM
Thank you, Jo! :)

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