Colors In the Sky

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"Two doves in white flying, feathers glow beneath the morning's rainbow colors" - Charles Messina
The sun thaws in a kaleidoscope of hues, of crimson, yellow, and blue flows. As the sun slumps into direct view, Sited off the coast, back to repose Sparkling shades pervade the sky, tributes to the lonesome moon. colors that are so vivid to the eye, Birds soar aloft to the nightingale's tune. Final sight of aesthetic grace, ahead of the onset of total nightfall. Relish the extent and luster of the place, awe-inspiring beauty, and splendor of it all. Conch gem and sylvan shell, splash ashore with scenic beauty. Sapphire tides wished each other well. over hills uttered in the birds' first fluty Absorb the morning's chuckling allure, it dispels fear and helps you sparkle like jade. Believing that love offers a delightful lure, delight at dawn with the sky's shade.
2nd place contest winner Written November 30, 2022 Submitted to: "Colors in the Sky" Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Mystic Rose Rose

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Date: 12/10/2022 2:02:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this beautiful poem.
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Date: 12/8/2022 8:20:00 PM
Back to your 'colorful' poem with Congratulations on your podium win in the contest, dear Lasaad!
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Date: 12/8/2022 2:11:00 PM
Congratulations on this winner. Way to go. Sara
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Date: 12/8/2022 10:55:00 AM
I love "morning's chuckling allure..." "birds soar aloft to the nightingale's tune" Beautiful poem, Lasaad.
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Date: 12/8/2022 9:39:00 AM
- What a beautiful poem, Las :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs
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Date: 12/8/2022 9:26:00 AM
You have painted quite a beautiful and shining picture with your words Lasaad - lovely! Congratulations on your win! :)
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Date: 12/2/2022 4:08:00 AM
Stunning imagery, Lasaad. A wonderful write my friend. Best wishes in the contest... You've added some spice to my quote :)
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Date: 12/1/2022 1:43:00 PM
beautiful portrayal of the scenic beauty of the sky! "Conch gem and sylvan shell, splash ashore.." Enjoyed the images. To my Faves. BW ~ Mala
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Date: 12/1/2022 1:02:00 PM
Lots of great imagery. Love it!
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Date: 12/1/2022 6:08:00 AM
Enjoyed the colors and tenor of your lovely poem my friend. A FAVE from me--one of your best.
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Date: 12/1/2022 4:20:00 AM
This is beautifully written :)
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Date: 11/30/2022 8:43:00 PM
A lovely assortment of colors during night and day in the sky and on the Earth! A real feast to the eye ! Greatly enjoyed ! All the best in the contest dear Lasaad !
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