Colorless Imagism

I will never forget the day my eyes saw you for the very first time My heart shook, and my hands began to sweat I felt my soul walk out of my body and hold your hand Never had I felt such a feeling before I then knew love was ever so real I looked at you forever it seemed You smiled back realizing I was lost with in my thoughts I knew you felt it too Was it love at first sight? No such thing could ever be real right? Is not love blind and without image For real love blooms from the bottom of the heart Real love has no age nor color It's an invisible yet powerful emotion with the power to over come it all I wrote to you and for you I felt in my spirit I would love you for ever and always Slowly you began to fall for the love that grew with in you How wonderful were those days Holding you and speaking poetry into your ears Crying at your side when the heart ached in pain Life is full of struggle, yet your smile was bright against any storm Then you left and hid behind your fear Was it really too good to be true? The fear that I would hurt you over powered what you felt Slowly you pushed me away We spoke only at times and brief simply because you forced what you felt for me out I wept because I knew you would go You faded into history and out of my life I told you what I felt for you was real Still, see you not I still write of us today It's been years and I still long for the day God may bring us back together I will love you forever my glimpse of hidden light
For GVR.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 3/10/2018 10:12:00 PM
Hi Edward.... I am enamored at the moment, let me gather myself....haha..."It's an invisible yet powerful emotion with the power to over come it all" Isnt that so true! Wow...beautiful words here! Perhaps your"glimpse of hidden light" will return someday, maybe not in the same person, or maybe they'll return? I know this pain, Edward. Your soul speaks beautifully <3 Always, Laura
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Date: 2/28/2018 4:33:00 PM
Very deep and profound beautiful thoughts. I especially like these words..."Real love has no age nor color...". I look forward to reading more of your stories Edward. This I have added to my favourites.
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Date: 2/27/2018 11:30:00 AM
My gosh this is sooooo beautiful! So heartfelt. That one true love ... soulmate. No one else can ever have such a special place in our heart. I hope that she has come back to you Edward.
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Date: 9/23/2015 7:57:00 PM
love <3 wonderful wirte, Edward. Hugs Eve
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Date: 9/19/2015 3:37:00 PM
an amazing poem Eddie...Your return brings passion and love back to us through words..Glad to read you oncemore.
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