Evelyn Judy Buehler Poet Haiku

Colorful Tornado

fiercest fall frenzy
clashing leaves, color chaos
no sound but the wind


Written on 1/17/2022
For: Nature Haiku with Alliteration Poetry Contest
Syllable count checked at howmanysyllables.com
Sponsor: Tania Kitchin

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Kim Rodrigues June 4, 2023 at 5:57 AM Fantastic, Evelyn! …a fury! Evelyn Judy Buehler June 4, 2023 at 12:17 PM Thank you, Kim. :)

Bill Baker January 18, 2022 at 8:52 PM Good entry, Evelyn. a lot of motion for a Haiku. Your friend, Bill Evelyn Judy Buehler January 18, 2022 at 10:14 PM Thank you for the compliment and the vote of confidence, Bill. Blessings and hugs, Evelyn

Alexis Y. January 18, 2022 at 5:10 PM WoW! Evelyn, I echo what Laura said, these are creative and good descriptions of fall. Best wishes in the contest. I hope your New Year is going well thus far. Have a nice evening-Alexis Evelyn Judy Buehler January 18, 2022 at 7:50 PM Alexis, your warm sentiments, as ever, are a delight. Thank you for the positive thoughts. My New Year is going wonderfully, thank you, and I hope yours is too, dear friend. Have a lovely evening, yourself. Evelyn

Joseph P. DiMino January 18, 2022 at 4:15 PM Lovely read! We get those dust devils in the high desert, and actually the high desert can be quite colorful when the cacti are blooming. Have a great evening, Evelyn. Evelyn Judy Buehler January 18, 2022 at 7:56 PM Desert blood are so pretty. I'll bet those cacti are quite a sight! Thank you for your gratifying words. You have a nice evening, too, Evelyn

Deb M January 18, 2022 at 7:48 AM Sounds scary to me Evelyn! Great poem. Debx Evelyn Judy Buehler January 18, 2022 at 9:40 AM If you're in the midst of the leaves, it is. Thank you, Deb. :)

Anne-Lise Andresen January 18, 2022 at 7:15 AM - Described so beautifully, Evelyn ... best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Evelyn Judy Buehler January 18, 2022 at 9:42 AM I'm very pleased you liked the images, Ann-Lise. Thank you. hugs :)

Victor Buhagiar January 18, 2022 at 12:10 AM Excellent haiku. And still so colorful. Victor Evelyn Judy Buehler January 18, 2022 at 9:43 AM Thank you so much. :)

Laura Leiser January 17, 2022 at 7:49 PM Ooh, I really love your creative descriptions of fall, Evelyn! Wonderful haiku! Good luck in the contest! :) Evelyn Judy Buehler January 17, 2022 at 8:38 PM Thank you, Laura. I'm truly delighted. :)