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Colorful Tornado

fiercest fall frenzy clashing leaves, color chaos no sound but the wind Written on 1/17/2022 For: Nature Haiku with Alliteration Poetry Contest Syllable count checked at howmanysyllables.com Sponsor: Tania Kitchin

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/4/2023 5:57:00 AM

Fantastic, Evelyn! …a fury!

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 6/4/2023 12:17:00 PM

Thank you, Kim. :)

Bill Baker

Date: 1/18/2022 8:52:00 PM

Good entry, Evelyn. a lot of motion for a Haiku. Your friend, Bill

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 1/18/2022 10:14:00 PM

Thank you for the compliment and the vote of confidence, Bill. Blessings and hugs, Evelyn

Alexis Y.

Date: 1/18/2022 5:10:00 PM

WoW! Evelyn, I echo what Laura said, these are creative and good descriptions of fall. Best wishes in the contest. I hope your New Year is going well thus far. Have a nice evening-Alexis

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 1/18/2022 7:50:00 PM

Alexis, your warm sentiments, as ever, are a delight. Thank you for the positive thoughts. My New Year is going wonderfully, thank you, and I hope yours is too, dear friend. Have a lovely evening, yourself. Evelyn

Joe Dimino

Date: 1/18/2022 4:15:00 PM

Lovely read! We get those dust devils in the high desert, and actually the high desert can be quite colorful when the cacti are blooming. Have a great evening, Evelyn.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 1/18/2022 7:56:00 PM

Desert blood are so pretty. I'll bet those cacti are quite a sight! Thank you for your gratifying words. You have a nice evening, too, Evelyn