Colorful

A peacock presents its colors to see Dazzling patterns, beautiful views, As pink cherry blossoms adorn the tree, Brushstrokes of nature offer colorful hues Birds sweetly sing to color the dawn As sunlight glistens in pearls of dew, Lilacs and lilies such beauty they spawn As the sky takes on a golden hue The pallette of nature is constantly changing Reds and golds of autumn, and spring dressed in green, From season to season they keep rearranging As the brushstrokes of nature color the scene -------------------------------

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/21/2023 11:08:00 AM

Joseph Let's see more new poetry from you! Thanks for your last comment to my poetry

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/20/2023 6:03:00 AM

Ahhh!! So delightful is this colorful one you have penned for a contest and so wonderful that it is a winner. Way to go. Thanks for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/17/2023 4:36:00 PM

I see this got a win. Congrats, Joseph

Heidi Sands

Date: 9/13/2023 9:07:00 AM

Oh I love this. Absolutely beautiful and peaceful. A Fave for me :)

Constance La France

Date: 9/10/2023 11:09:00 PM

Joseph, wonderful writing and congratulations on your win in my contest, Constance

Joanna Daniel

Date: 9/7/2023 12:02:00 AM

Lovely poem on colours in nature, Joseph:) congratulations:)

Bill Baker

Date: 9/6/2023 4:03:00 PM

Great rhyming and vivid imagery, Joseph. I enjoyed the read. Have a great Day! A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 9/5/2023 8:44:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. A lovely write. I enjoyed it. Have a great day.............

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 9/5/2023 4:07:00 AM

Wonderful. Congrats on your top win, Joseph. God bless you always, Love, Gina

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/5/2023 2:23:00 AM

How true that the palette of color is always changing.

Ink Empress

Date: 9/4/2023 9:52:00 PM

Congratulations. Well deserved win. You are truly a very artistic poet with such beautiful imagery to present. One of my faves too

Hiya Sharma

Date: 9/4/2023 5:55:00 AM

Oh wow, such a breathtaking piece this is, I love the way you've hued natural elements and their shimmering colours from the beautiful poetic pallette and have arranged such gorgeous imageries within these magical lines! The rhymes are so resplendent and beautiful~

Silent One

Date: 9/3/2023 10:58:00 AM

Great rhymes and rhe flow is very good...you created.vivid imagery here

Eve Roper

Date: 9/2/2023 9:18:00 PM

Great imagery for the palette of nature’s color. Peacocks for one are so stunning and walk like they own the world. The small delicate cherry blossoms when the decide to depart from the tree like rain to color the ground. I love to hear the birds out in my tree, but since it has been so hot they are just not in a joyful mood. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for my placement in your contest.

Valsa George

Date: 9/1/2023 11:45:00 PM

With changing seasons, nature is painted anew with varying colors. This wonderful display is beautifully captured in your poem. All the Best in the contest dear Joseph.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/31/2023 6:38:00 PM

Beauty imagery, Joseph. I think almost everyone is doing the colorful word!

Brandy Nicole

Date: 8/31/2023 12:01:00 PM

Those vivid colors beaming from the feathers of a peacock, is a beautiful refection of nature. Each and every season. Your thoughts bring a smile to my heart. My best to you, Joseph. :) Hugs, Brandy

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/31/2023 5:10:00 AM

Every stanza buzzes in colorful, delightful hues, Joseph. Much enjoyed the lively tenor of your poem.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/31/2023 3:17:00 AM

- A beautiful poem ... a beauty in colors ... best wishes in the contest, Joseph :) - hugs

Ink Empress

Date: 8/31/2023 1:33:00 AM

Palette of nature and colors of seasons and fleeting time so very artistically depicted. I absolutely love the color choices here and the wordplay and flow is just soul warming! Pink cherry blossoms, pearls of dew: how creative is this. Loveee it

Kim Merryman

Date: 8/30/2023 7:40:00 PM

Beautiful array of colors presented, Joseph! Love the imagery! Blessings, Kim M

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/30/2023 5:01:00 PM

Such lovely colors…a peacock presents!