Colored

“COLORED!”

I’m lighter colored, brown colored, “white” colored, WHITE.
You’re darker colored, brown colored, “black” colored, BLACK.
But WHITE brown colored or BLACK brown colored… 
We’re all brown COLORED.

” COLORED!”

Noels_Art

Comments: A short poem about us. I think we all have so much in common. FEEDBACK WELCOME.

10th gradelovepeaceprejudicefree verse

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Matthew Anish

March 13, 2019 at 4:15 PM

We are all colored - just different colors - good and bad people who are white, black, yellow and red! Stimulating work! Keep it up and is you feel like read some of my work - Matthew Anish

Noel Flater

March 14, 2019 at 7:02 PM

Thank Matthew, feedback helps me write

Debbie Duncan

March 8, 2019 at 10:50 PM

Yes, that's what the news seems to keep telling us :)

Noel Flater

March 10, 2019 at 7:38 PM

Debbie, Sometimes the news is a good thing. NoelsArt

Jackie Furgason

March 7, 2019 at 8:47 PM

I really enjoyed it and yes you don't need to write a long poem to get your point across. God looks at all his children with loving eyes. He loves all of us no matter what color.,,, We are all brothers and sisters. Thank you for sharing this poem,,, Jacqui

Noel Flater

March 24, 2019 at 11:20 AM

Jackie, Thanks for your thoughts and inspiring words. We can all make this better together Noel form NoelsArt

Miya Xavier

March 7, 2019 at 6:14 PM

I love it. Inside We're actually just one color. This was great.

Noel Flater

March 10, 2019 at 7:38 PM

Miya, We are in agreement! NoelsArt

Panagiota Romios

March 3, 2019 at 11:09 AM

Noel, good one. People might misunderstand you. I don't ! Take off the outer skin, we are all the same. Once you see an autopsy,you get it. I did! However, being a color tops how good a person is, in a world awash with political correctness. A sad thing for any color. We are not crayons, anyway.there are no white people..all have colored skin. We are all equally human. Panagiota

Noel Flater

March 6, 2019 at 8:17 AM

Panagiota, My goal is to bring us all together, through words. I'm glad you see that!

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