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If my melancholy can polish bliss Sifting dust of distress for pebbles' shine Crack a rocky lair to a gemstone mine What colors do my tunnel vision miss? 1/18/20

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Date: 2/22/2020 6:09:00 PM
Michelle, I like your poem and congratulations on your win in my contest _Constance
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Date: 2/5/2020 12:26:00 PM
Unique, well done.
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Date: 1/23/2020 11:11:00 PM
Profound message here, Michelle. A FAVE for me. Had to ponder this quite a while to get it. Maybe I overtired---or maybe it's superb poetry. Some of each!! Bravo, Poet. Cheers, Gershon
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 1/24/2020 10:52:00 PM
Thank you for the compliment, it means a lot-
Date: 1/22/2020 2:46:00 PM
very clever indeed
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 1/24/2020 10:51:00 PM
Appreciate it, jack
Date: 1/19/2020 3:43:00 PM
I enjoyed this...
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 1/21/2020 3:24:00 PM
Thanks, Arturo..
Date: 1/19/2020 1:57:00 PM
Creative imagery, If my melancholy can polish bliss. I enjoyed seing your entry for Greg's contest.
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 1/21/2020 3:24:00 PM
Thank you for your kind comment, Andrea
Date: 1/19/2020 6:05:00 AM
What a fascinating stanza to choose Michelle, I especially love the final 2 lines:-) hugs Jan xx
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 1/21/2020 3:23:00 PM
Thank you so much, Jan!
Date: 1/18/2020 10:54:00 PM
Michelle, I think Greg will love this intriguing entry. Great work! xxoo
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 1/21/2020 3:22:00 PM
Appreciate it, thank you, Connie-

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