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Colorado Low

Snow Sweeping Surmounting Swallowing whole Storm Stuck Stranded Silently Suffering till Spring

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/14/2019 10:43:00 AM

What's John Denver gonna do in his grave when he reads this one, eh?! LOL. Love the title! :) gw

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 3/14/2019 3:46:00 PM

Giggles! ;D Thank you Wolf Man! xomo

Agnes Krampe

Date: 3/12/2019 7:08:00 AM

Like it. This is a tough contest to write for.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 3/12/2019 7:42:00 AM

Thank you Agnes. It is a tough one; another poet kindly pointed out I did not follow all of the rules, I'm too happy with it to edit, so I withdrew ;) xomo

Tania Kitchin

Date: 3/11/2019 4:24:00 PM

Great one Mo, I agree enough snow! Think Spring! Good luck in the contest!

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 3/11/2019 6:27:00 PM

Thank you Tania! In with the spring air, out with the winter air... ;) xomo!

Eve Roper

Date: 3/11/2019 1:28:00 PM

Well done and a very good subject you have chosen, Maureen. This was not an easy form. I ignored the first contest because I didn't think I could do it, but after reading the winners list maybe I should have tried. Good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve ~`*

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 3/11/2019 2:07:00 PM

Thank you Eve! I'm not sure how much it lights up the page, with a white out ;) xomo <3

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/11/2019 1:24:00 PM

Well written Maureen, scratching my head with this one. My muse is on vacation I think. Good luck. Tom.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 3/11/2019 2:05:00 PM

The name given to a particular winter, spring, storm formation, by the time it hits us it's packing ;) Thank you! xomo

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/11/2019 1:21:00 PM

- S - for SUPER work, Maureen !- I am so ready for the spring ... but the spring is not ready, we have had snow today :))) - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 3/11/2019 2:02:00 PM

Meeee too! So ready ;o) Thank you Anne-Lise! :) xomo

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 3/11/2019 1:02:00 PM

Superbly written dearest, Maureen! Hugs! Good luck!

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 3/11/2019 2:00:00 PM

Thank you sweet D! xomo <3

Jan Allison

Date: 3/11/2019 12:53:00 PM

lovely imagery Mo, good luck in the contest - soup mail:-) hugs jan xx

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 3/11/2019 1:59:00 PM

Thank you Jan! ;) xomo

Alexis Y.

Date: 3/11/2019 11:40:00 AM

Hi Maureen, Great use "S" words. Good imagery as well. Best wishes in the contest:-) Alexis

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 3/11/2019 1:53:00 PM

Thank you Alexis! :o) xomo!

Jeff Connelly

Date: 3/11/2019 11:23:00 AM

Surprised to see Colorado in the title. I thought you were stuck in one of your Canadian big ones.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 3/11/2019 1:52:00 PM

I am. Never unaffected by American weather ;) "Carolina Low", the mumble on the radio before the centimeter snow forecast. I still have not figured out where you are stuck.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/11/2019 10:15:00 AM

Great imagery in the first stanza especially!

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 3/11/2019 10:27:00 AM

Thank you Kim! :) xomo

Janice Canerdy

Date: 3/11/2019 9:40:00 AM

Very well-written--great use of alliteration, Maureen. Janice

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 3/11/2019 9:45:00 AM

Thank you Janice! I almost called it "Suffering Snow Succotash" ;) xomo!