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vivid green cedar
against winter's bare oak tree
red bird sits alone

©Donna Jones

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 5/4/2013 10:42:00 AM
I do like the colors! The scene brings to mind contentment and solitude. I love haiku's ability to dialogue memories... almost like having a journal, but in bite-size chunks instead of whole passages. Good haiku work!
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Date: 5/1/2013 8:34:00 PM
Creative color Donna....Congratulations...
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Donna Jones
Date: 5/1/2013 9:23:00 PM
So kind Judy
Date: 4/27/2013 5:49:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Donna! I can visualize the scene... So great! Love, Hanitra
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Date: 4/27/2013 9:43:00 PM
You are kind..thanks...
Date: 4/22/2013 11:20:00 AM
Congratulations on such a remarkable winning haiku.
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Date: 4/22/2013 9:47:00 PM
Than you so much carol.....:-)
Date: 4/21/2013 2:55:00 AM
Beautiful haiku Donna!...Congratulations - Tim
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Date: 4/21/2013 6:26:00 AM
Thank you Tim ...so nice of you.....:-)
Date: 4/20/2013 6:13:00 PM
Just stopping by to let you know that there is now a blog offering some extra comments on the contest. Have a great weekend!
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Date: 4/21/2013 6:27:00 AM
Thank you for sponsoring and honoring my poem Isaiah ....
Date: 4/20/2013 2:18:00 PM
Congratulations. This is really beautiful. Love, SuZ
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Date: 4/21/2013 6:28:00 AM
:-) thank Suz.....very nice...
Date: 4/20/2013 9:08:00 AM
Congrats Donna on your grand win~A.O
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Date: 4/21/2013 6:29:00 AM
A.O. so kind....thanks.....
Date: 4/20/2013 6:41:00 AM
Congrats on your win. Vivid.
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Date: 4/21/2013 6:30:00 AM
Hey...I like that word......thanks...:-) :-) :-) :-) :-)
Date: 4/19/2013 6:43:00 PM
Great job!
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Date: 4/21/2013 6:31:00 AM
Thank you Richard....
Date: 4/19/2013 6:20:00 PM
yup very nice haiku [no capitals necessary ;)] congrad's on your win Light & Love
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Date: 4/21/2013 6:32:00 AM
Always appreciate you Debbie....thanks...
Date: 4/19/2013 4:17:00 PM
congrats on a great win Donna
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Date: 4/21/2013 6:32:00 AM
Appreciate your support Joseph
Date: 4/19/2013 1:42:00 PM
Ahh...this is gorgeous, Donna!! Congratulations!!
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Date: 4/21/2013 6:34:00 AM
Oh thank you Carrie...again...your smile makes my day...
Date: 4/19/2013 1:29:00 PM
Congratulations Donna, very colourful writeTake care, Richard
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Date: 4/21/2013 6:34:00 AM
Appreciate it Richard...have a great day...
Date: 4/19/2013 12:18:00 PM
Well done Donna.......Seren
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Date: 4/21/2013 6:35:00 AM
Thanks sweetie....
Date: 4/19/2013 12:15:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Donna. Short and colorful. :)
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Date: 4/21/2013 6:35:00 AM
Thanks dearest...
Date: 4/19/2013 11:52:00 AM
Congratulations, Donna. First haiku I've seen from you, personally. You would have fooled me completely. Cheers, Roy
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Date: 4/21/2013 6:38:00 AM
Yeah Roy ...this contest was for firsts.....sooooo with help...my first haiku....thanks...
Date: 4/19/2013 11:38:00 AM
This is an excellent Haiku which I extremely enjoyed reading my dear friend Donna! No wonder why i read many congratulatory comments here 'cuz it really deserved its great win! Hope I'm not yet late to say as well! Congratulations with big hugs to you, not only on your win but on this outstanding haiku of yours. Thank you so much for sharing and for your very inspiring comments on my ABC poem as well. My great honor for sharing my poem w/ your sister. Million thanks! love lots, Leonora
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Date: 4/21/2013 6:40:00 AM
Thanks dearest Leonora...you are never too late..I look forward to your sweet words of encouragement...have a great new week.....
Date: 4/19/2013 10:15:00 AM
Good afternoon Donna, Congratulations :-) with your awesome win in Isaiah's "Pull the Wool Over My Eyes!" contest :-) always loving your poems : > LINDA < :
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Date: 4/21/2013 6:41:00 AM
So much appreciated Linda. Likewise....have a great one....
Date: 4/19/2013 10:03:00 AM
Excellent for your first haiku! I wish to congratulate you on your winning place in my contest!
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Date: 4/21/2013 6:42:00 AM
Thank you so much Isaiah....it was fun and I feel honored....
Date: 4/14/2013 2:04:00 PM
I'm so very proud of you, MD. I'm so very proud of you! You are an amazing poet. Beautiful haiku! You've created a masterpiece! LOVE YOU!
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Date: 4/14/2013 9:02:00 PM
Thank you dearest Eileen...glad you like the final revision...thank you for your help so much!!! MD
Date: 4/14/2013 7:21:00 AM
The Cardinals are back...singing in my pines here in Minnesota...I love this haiku! jimbo
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Date: 4/14/2013 9:04:00 AM
Thanks Jimbo ...enjoy spring!
Date: 4/13/2013 6:05:00 PM
I know just enough about haikus to realize.... This one is a gem..... Jake
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Date: 4/13/2013 7:17:00 PM
Thanks Jake...appreciate it...Donna
Date: 4/13/2013 8:07:00 AM
Good stuff dear Donna! Do some more! I tried some... think I'll get back to my comfort zone (quatrains)! LOL Hugs, Jack xox
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Date: 4/13/2013 9:39:00 AM
I'll have to go back down your list and check them out! Thanks Jack...
Date: 4/13/2013 7:31:00 AM
Thanks so much for your visit and comment. Contests like that are so difficult because there are many people you would like to thank. You are very high on that list.
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Donna Jones
Date: 4/13/2013 9:40:00 AM
Kind of you Richard...:-)
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