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Color I dare not think of you too long because your color is youth. A different color than mine now but I remember what it was, it’s taste and feel. The thought of your color has awakened in me long buried dreams, I had thought either slumbered or lay quietly like dogs by a fire. But your color in the soft muted pastels of day end brought my senses to light. In that light, a new day then to come, longed for but also feared. Dreams afraid to be uncovered. Submitted for: Poetry As Legacy Contest Line Gauthier March 19, 2021

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Date: 5/7/2021 11:27:00 PM
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David Holmes
Date: 5/12/2021 2:13:00 PM
thank you! David
Date: 5/7/2021 10:48:00 PM
A wondrous take on the subject, David, well-penned indeed, my gratitude for your participation, and my compliments on your well-deserved placement my friend, Aloha!
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Date: 3/20/2021 3:52:00 AM
A lovely poem David, devoid of the views and comments it truly merits. Cheers - Gary
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David Holmes
Date: 3/23/2021 3:58:00 PM
Gary, thank you for such a wonderful comment, I really appreciate you taking time to read and comment on my poems, David

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