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Collection of Birds

Happy pelican eating an enormous fish see his pouch bulging Merry kingfisher waiting on his pole for fish he darts and spears one Full of joy and fun the skylark warbles in glee delight in each note Fearsome eagle drops plummeting down like a stone striking hard he kills

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Date: 10/22/2013 6:33:00 AM
nice poem
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 10/22/2013 8:40:00 AM
hi There mr/s X Ty for enjoying Shadow x smile
Date: 10/20/2013 5:03:00 AM
Lovely images my friend.
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Date: 10/20/2013 6:21:00 AM
a bit of fun dear M.M birds enrich the world Shadow x ox smile hugs
Date: 10/17/2013 10:40:00 PM
If it is for a contest, please give once over to the first line of the last haiku. You have created a lovely pictures of naturfe
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Date: 10/18/2013 4:10:00 AM
hi Dr Ram it is not at the moment but Ty so much for pointing it out I have corrected it also Ty for reading Shadow x smile
Date: 10/17/2013 6:53:00 PM
This isone form that eludes me, you seem to be comfortable with it.
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Date: 10/17/2013 7:07:00 PM
I love the form. Mind you I could not do some of the forms you use with such ease Shadow x smile hugs
Date: 10/17/2013 2:14:00 PM
- Quality haiku, Shadow ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 10/17/2013 2:49:00 PM
hi Anne Lise Ty so much have a great weekend Shadow x smile
Date: 10/17/2013 12:32:00 PM
A beautiful natural picture adorned with very nice imagination, my friend. Excellent beauty is hidden in it. Loved always, bl
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 10/17/2013 1:19:00 PM
hi Bl you are always so kind in your reviews ty Shadow x smile
Date: 10/17/2013 10:37:00 AM
Excellent Haiku. Thanks for sharing. JM
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 10/17/2013 1:19:00 PM
hi Joseph my pleasure so glad you enjoyed them Shadow x smile
Date: 10/17/2013 6:46:00 AM
Lovely poem. I love to watch birds and I felt like I was watching yours through the words.
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Date: 10/17/2013 1:21:00 PM
hi Monterey trust all is well birds are lovely to watch so graceful. Ty for enjoying Shadow x smile

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