Shadow Hamilton Poet Haiku

Collection of Birds

Happy pelican
eating an enormous fish
see his pouch bulging

Merry kingfisher
waiting on his pole for fish
he darts and spears one

Full of joy and fun
the skylark warbles in glee
delight in each note

Fearsome eagle drops
plummeting down like a stone
striking hard he kills

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October 22, 2013 at 6:33 AM nice poem Shadow Hamilton October 22, 2013 at 8:40 AM hi There mr/s X Ty for enjoying Shadow x smile

Mustapha Mohammed October 20, 2013 at 5:03 AM Lovely images my friend. Shadow Hamilton October 20, 2013 at 6:21 AM a bit of fun dear M.M birds enrich the world Shadow x ox smile hugs

Dr.Ram Mehta October 17, 2013 at 10:40 PM If it is for a contest, please give once over to the first line of the last haiku. You have created a lovely pictures of naturfe Shadow Hamilton October 18, 2013 at 4:10 AM hi Dr Ram it is not at the moment but Ty so much for pointing it out I have corrected it also Ty for reading Shadow x smile

Richard Lamoureux October 17, 2013 at 6:53 PM This isone form that eludes me, you seem to be comfortable with it. Shadow Hamilton October 17, 2013 at 7:07 PM I love the form. Mind you I could not do some of the forms you use with such ease Shadow x smile hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen October 17, 2013 at 2:14 PM - Quality haiku, Shadow ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Shadow Hamilton October 17, 2013 at 2:49 PM hi Anne Lise Ty so much have a great weekend Shadow x smile

Bl Devnath October 17, 2013 at 12:32 PM A beautiful natural picture adorned with very nice imagination, my friend. Excellent beauty is hidden in it. Loved always, bl Shadow Hamilton October 17, 2013 at 1:19 PM hi Bl you are always so kind in your reviews ty Shadow x smile

Joseph Matose October 17, 2013 at 10:37 AM Excellent Haiku. Thanks for sharing. JM Shadow Hamilton October 17, 2013 at 1:19 PM hi Joseph my pleasure so glad you enjoyed them Shadow x smile

Monterey Sirak October 17, 2013 at 6:46 AM Lovely poem. I love to watch birds and I felt like I was watching yours through the words. Shadow Hamilton October 17, 2013 at 1:21 PM hi Monterey trust all is well birds are lovely to watch so graceful. Ty for enjoying Shadow x smile