Collateral Damage

One can hear metal grinding on metal
making a mournful sound.
A rusted door swinging aimlessly.
The sounds of the death of a town.

Or, perhaps, a section of a city
infected with jobless blight,
a paved road crumbling to nowhere,
windows boarded up from the light.

Buildings that once contained myriad sounds
of workers and machines into the night.
The stream of workers changing shifts
became a comforting sight

Now, ships loaded with raw materials
pass silently in the night,
headed for more distant shores.
Money changed what was once thought right.

And why hasn't this obvious travesty
turned the lawmakers' swivel heads?
They're searching for that pot of gold,
never mind about industry's dead.

The ruins of collateral damage
are hidden by the lustrous Midas gold.
Old Glory sewn by workers' hands
is just part of our story told.

We've added new chapters that tear our hearts
as they tell of our greedy ways.
Our country is selling its inner strength
and it's the worker who finally pays.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021


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Date: 5/6/2021 2:33:00 PM
Yes, we must not forget the American jobs and American workers who are the backbone of our country, very well put~
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Ann Peck
Date: 5/7/2021 2:29:00 PM
Thanks for commenting, Michelle. I long for those clanging sounds of industry.
Date: 5/5/2021 8:05:00 AM
Oh Ann, what an unique and inspired theme, and sooo important too. How were you inspired? I am a career industrialist and sadly see our basic industries flee to foreign shores. Again you hit the mark.
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Ann Peck
Date: 5/5/2021 1:27:00 PM
Thank you so much, Ken! Well, I was inspired by watching our country allow industries to leave for China, India, Mexico, et.al, while our buildings stand empty and we have so many living in cars and on streets. The rich get richer, and our country suffers. Thanks for your comments!
Date: 5/3/2021 3:08:00 PM
very nicely done, Ann. You delivered a message so important in today's world.
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Ann Peck
Date: 5/3/2021 4:15:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea, for your comments. I need to concentrate on the beautiful instead of the ugly :)
Date: 5/3/2021 12:43:00 PM
Well thought and composed! Aloha! Rico
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Ann Peck
Date: 5/3/2021 1:32:00 PM
Hey Rico! We need to change the direction these jobs are going! Aloha!
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