Collage of a Drifting Love

Memories of  a  love I’m losing
arrested  thoughts on sculpture paper-
an altered photograph, adorned
 by hand cut leaves, evergreen shades, and lace
From the page emits, cricket songs
 drifting  to gloaming,  and on and on
 into my own mandarin twilight.

I adjust a pair of glittered wings
 to your thorax,  twiddle them
 these symbols of  your intending flight 
Next, I place a crumpled love letter. 
 its text, garbled by smeared on gesso

 Covered so no one will guess the message-

 except, perhaps where a small spy glass
 magnifies, I LoVe YoU- I LoVe YoU-   
 

High on the page a bluebird brightly sings

10/28/2013 10:17 AM
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Marcum Wong Avatar
June 4, 2017 at 11:21 PM
This is one I missed SuZ. It is very beautiful...mystical and spiritual in its conveyance. I hope you are well my friend? Blessings, Connie : )
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November 27, 2013 at 12:12 AM
Hi Suz, Thank you for spreading and sharing your kindness. You know me I’ will always enjoy stopping by with love and support, no matter if I do not Understand what I am reading at times. I am very grateful and thankful to all who have been supportive of me one way or another. Your heartfelt words are the main attraction of who you are… Thanks for your inspiring visit. ----- Happy Thanksgiving ~ LINDA
Lamoureux Avatar
November 13, 2013 at 9:30 AM
Sweet and romantic. Congratulations.
Bantawa Avatar
November 13, 2013 at 8:55 AM
liked your poem. congrats on your placement in the contest.
Dietrich Avatar
November 12, 2013 at 11:25 PM
what a very creative entry with those images bringing things to life. Congrats on your win, Suz. Glad to finally see this one.
Mehta Avatar
November 12, 2013 at 9:21 PM
Congratulations on the win, suZ-D
Guzzi Avatar
November 12, 2013 at 7:36 PM
mandarin twilight- exquisite metaphor! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Jones Avatar
November 12, 2013 at 6:29 PM
Ahhh. Nice!! Congratulations
Adams Avatar
November 12, 2013 at 6:29 PM
beautifully penned...congrats on your fine win :)
Anglesey Avatar
November 12, 2013 at 12:57 PM
Congrats on the win. Glowing imagery in this very lovely poem. :)
Gorelick Avatar
November 12, 2013 at 11:15 AM
Congrats...I really enjoyed this one. BG
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