Sara Ella Poet Rhyme

Collaboration Contest

Life On The Inside

As the trees whisper words of wisdom,
The wolf lies below and howls,
To the Raven high in branches above,
Their spirits entwined beyond the visible 

raven caws from the highest tree
bringing news of the territory 
beneath laddered branches green
wolf listens patiently, ready

Across the meadows' silent in night
A lone white owl hunts her prey
The mouse scurries below in crystal snow
No escape for him from her deadly array

Arrow straight, towering tall
with soft evergreen leaves
shelter fur and lofty feather
time tested, giving life to all

See with divine light
Shine on brightly the way
Learn through divine knowledge
Be quiet not, have your say


10~July~2017

For Jan's collaboration contest

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Mahtab Bangalee February 28, 2019 at 11:46 PM beautiful poem, the last stanza really touched me///

Eve Roper October 16, 2017 at 10:55 AM Love the imagery in the nicely written piece. I knew this was written with White Wolf without reading the comment it is so like his work a wonderful compliment to both..... :) Hugs Eve ~`* Sara Ella October 16, 2017 at 2:59 PM He is so fun to write with - Thank you Eve :)

Eileen Manassian October 1, 2017 at 2:14 AM Good luck in the contest with this beautiful write, Sara. It's nice to work in collaboration with someone. The scenes you depicted are very vivid and lovely. Sara Ella October 16, 2017 at 2:58 PM Thank you Eileen :D We had fun creating this one <3

Eileen Manassian October 1, 2017 at 2:09 AM Good luck in the contest with this beautiful write, Sara. It's nice to work in collaboration with someone. The scenes you depicted are very vivid and lovely.

Akkina Downing August 16, 2017 at 9:51 PM I love every line of this fantastic piece. Not sure where have I been that I didn't read this awesomeness weeks ago. Yes I'm adding it to my faves, you both are amazing :) Sara Ella August 16, 2017 at 9:56 PM Thank you Akkina! We certainly had fun writing this - Rick is an inspiration :)

White Wolf July 31, 2017 at 10:45 AM I can't even tell which is you and me anymore, Sara! LOL... But I really enjoyed writing with you, dear poet! Sara Ella August 1, 2017 at 10:29 PM This was so fun to write with you :) Thank you for this and I hope we can do another one! <3

Silent One July 17, 2017 at 5:48 AM This is an excellent collaboration Sara, it really flows and I can't tell who did which part.. This looks like a winner to me..

Ravi Sathasivam July 17, 2017 at 1:31 AM Excellent and beautiful write on collaboration. All the best for the contest. Thanks for sharing it. Sara Ella July 17, 2017 at 9:42 PM Thank you Ravi :) It is fun just to work with excellent poets <3

Becca Teagan July 16, 2017 at 11:40 PM I have no idea who Budgie is lol But you two worked very well together! This is very good, peaceful poem. Sara Ella July 17, 2017 at 9:42 PM Thank you Becca :) We had a lot of fun doing this one <3

Andrea Dietrich July 13, 2017 at 8:14 PM this is so lovely, Sara. I have a guess who your partner may have been. I need to check out his poetry and see if it is him! Oh wait I see someone saying his name down here. It WAS Budgie. I just knew it! Sara Ella July 14, 2017 at 6:34 AM Thank you Andrea :) Budgie and I had fun with it!

Lisa Ricci July 11, 2017 at 12:18 PM Good Afternoon Sara. Allow me to simply and briefly say this is extremely beautiful soft and gentle. All is well within your execution and expression. This is poetry. Well done entirely and completely. Have a wonderful afternoon. May this day find you well. Sara Ella July 11, 2017 at 9:58 PM Thank you so much Lisa :) My first contest and really, it is fun to create in collaborations <3

Darren White July 11, 2017 at 1:55 AM Budgie and you did an outstanding job my friend, this is wonderful :) Good luck in the contest! Sara Ella July 11, 2017 at 7:21 AM Thank you Darren :) we had fun in creating it!

Connie Marcum Wong July 10, 2017 at 6:15 PM A very beautiful collaboration! Best of luck in the contest. : ) Sara Ella July 10, 2017 at 6:17 PM Thank you Connie :) This was a fun collaboration with Rick <3

Anne-Lise Andresen July 10, 2017 at 3:05 PM - I enjoy this beautiful co-write, Sara :) - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Sara Ella July 10, 2017 at 6:17 PM Thank you Anne-Lise :) It is my first contest! Rick and I had fun with this one <3

Joseph May July 10, 2017 at 11:39 AM Beautiful collaboration Sara...I like the spiritual connection.. Sara Ella July 10, 2017 at 12:50 PM Thank you Joseph! That is just what Budgie and I were trying to do :)

Tim Smith July 10, 2017 at 8:26 AM A wonderful weave Sara. You and Budgie did great Sara Ella July 10, 2017 at 12:48 PM Thank you Tim :) We had fun with this!

Chris Green July 10, 2017 at 6:40 AM This was beautiful and adventurous and so real feeling. Nature has a little bit of everything and you have shown that. Bravo to both poets...I think I can guess who the second poet was. : ) This was really nice Sara. Best wishes in the contest Sara Ella July 10, 2017 at 12:47 PM Thank you Chris :) Yes this was fun creating with Budgie <3