Collaboration Contest

Life On The Inside As the trees whisper words of wisdom, The wolf lies below and howls, To the Raven high in branches above, Their spirits entwined beyond the visible raven caws from the highest tree bringing news of the territory beneath laddered branches green wolf listens patiently, ready Across the meadows' silent in night A lone white owl hunts her prey The mouse scurries below in crystal snow No escape for him from her deadly array Arrow straight, towering tall with soft evergreen leaves shelter fur and lofty feather time tested, giving life to all See with divine light Shine on brightly the way Learn through divine knowledge Be quiet not, have your say
10~July~2017 For Jan's collaboration contest

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Date: 2/28/2019 11:46:00 PM
beautiful poem, the last stanza really touched me///
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Date: 10/16/2017 10:55:00 AM
Love the imagery in the nicely written piece. I knew this was written with White Wolf without reading the comment it is so like his work a wonderful compliment to both..... :) Hugs Eve ~`*
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Sara Ella
Date: 10/16/2017 2:59:00 PM
He is so fun to write with - Thank you Eve :)
Date: 10/1/2017 2:14:00 AM
Good luck in the contest with this beautiful write, Sara. It's nice to work in collaboration with someone. The scenes you depicted are very vivid and lovely.
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Sara Ella
Date: 10/16/2017 2:58:00 PM
Thank you Eileen :D We had fun creating this one <3
Date: 10/1/2017 2:09:00 AM
Good luck in the contest with this beautiful write, Sara. It's nice to work in collaboration with someone. The scenes you depicted are very vivid and lovely.
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Date: 8/16/2017 9:51:00 PM
I love every line of this fantastic piece. Not sure where have I been that I didn't read this awesomeness weeks ago. Yes I'm adding it to my faves, you both are amazing :)
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Sara Ella
Date: 8/16/2017 9:56:00 PM
Thank you Akkina! We certainly had fun writing this - Rick is an inspiration :)
Date: 7/31/2017 10:45:00 AM
I can't even tell which is you and me anymore, Sara! LOL... But I really enjoyed writing with you, dear poet!
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Sara Ella
Date: 8/1/2017 10:29:00 PM
This was so fun to write with you :) Thank you for this and I hope we can do another one! <3
Date: 7/17/2017 5:48:00 AM
This is an excellent collaboration Sara, it really flows and I can't tell who did which part.. This looks like a winner to me..
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Date: 7/17/2017 1:31:00 AM
Excellent and beautiful write on collaboration. All the best for the contest. Thanks for sharing it.
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Sara Ella
Date: 7/17/2017 9:42:00 PM
Thank you Ravi :) It is fun just to work with excellent poets <3
Date: 7/16/2017 11:40:00 PM
I have no idea who Budgie is lol But you two worked very well together! This is very good, peaceful poem.
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Sara Ella
Date: 7/17/2017 9:42:00 PM
Thank you Becca :) We had a lot of fun doing this one <3
Date: 7/13/2017 8:14:00 PM
this is so lovely, Sara. I have a guess who your partner may have been. I need to check out his poetry and see if it is him! Oh wait I see someone saying his name down here. It WAS Budgie. I just knew it!
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Sara Ella
Date: 7/14/2017 6:34:00 AM
Thank you Andrea :) Budgie and I had fun with it!
Date: 7/11/2017 12:18:00 PM
Good Afternoon Sara. Allow me to simply and briefly say this is extremely beautiful soft and gentle. All is well within your execution and expression. This is poetry. Well done entirely and completely. Have a wonderful afternoon. May this day find you well.
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Sara Ella
Date: 7/11/2017 9:58:00 PM
Thank you so much Lisa :) My first contest and really, it is fun to create in collaborations <3
Date: 7/11/2017 1:55:00 AM
Budgie and you did an outstanding job my friend, this is wonderful :) Good luck in the contest!
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Sara Ella
Date: 7/11/2017 7:21:00 AM
Thank you Darren :) we had fun in creating it!
Date: 7/10/2017 6:15:00 PM
A very beautiful collaboration! Best of luck in the contest. : )
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Sara Ella
Date: 7/10/2017 6:17:00 PM
Thank you Connie :) This was a fun collaboration with Rick <3
Date: 7/10/2017 3:05:00 PM
- I enjoy this beautiful co-write, Sara :) - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Sara Ella
Date: 7/10/2017 6:17:00 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise :) It is my first contest! Rick and I had fun with this one <3
Date: 7/10/2017 11:39:00 AM
Beautiful collaboration Sara...I like the spiritual connection..
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Sara Ella
Date: 7/10/2017 12:50:00 PM
Thank you Joseph! That is just what Budgie and I were trying to do :)
Date: 7/10/2017 8:26:00 AM
A wonderful weave Sara. You and Budgie did great
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Sara Ella
Date: 7/10/2017 12:48:00 PM
Thank you Tim :) We had fun with this!
Date: 7/10/2017 6:40:00 AM
This was beautiful and adventurous and so real feeling. Nature has a little bit of everything and you have shown that. Bravo to both poets...I think I can guess who the second poet was. : ) This was really nice Sara. Best wishes in the contest
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Sara Ella
Date: 7/10/2017 12:47:00 PM
Thank you Chris :) Yes this was fun creating with Budgie <3
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