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Collaboration Contest

Life On The Inside

As the trees whisper words of wisdom,
The wolf lies below and howls,
To the Raven high in branches above,
Their spirits entwined beyond the visible 

raven caws from the highest tree
bringing news of the territory 
beneath laddered branches green
wolf listens patiently, ready

Across the meadows' silent in night
A lone white owl hunts her prey
The mouse scurries below in crystal snow
No escape for him from her deadly array

Arrow straight, towering tall
with soft evergreen leaves
shelter fur and lofty feather
time tested, giving life to all

See with divine light
Shine on brightly the way
Learn through divine knowledge
Be quiet not, have your say


10~July~2017

For Jan's collaboration contest

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Mahtab Bangalee Date: 2/28/2019 11:46:00 PM beautiful poem, the last stanza really touched me/// Login to Reply

Eve Roper Date: 10/16/2017 10:55:00 AM Love the imagery in the nicely written piece. I knew this was written with White Wolf without reading the comment it is so like his work a wonderful compliment to both..... :) Hugs Eve ~`* Login to Reply Sara Ella Date: 10/16/2017 2:59:00 PM He is so fun to write with - Thank you Eve :)

Eileen Manassian Date: 10/1/2017 2:14:00 AM Good luck in the contest with this beautiful write, Sara. It's nice to work in collaboration with someone. The scenes you depicted are very vivid and lovely. Login to Reply Sara Ella Date: 10/16/2017 2:58:00 PM Thank you Eileen :D We had fun creating this one <3

Eileen Manassian Date: 10/1/2017 2:09:00 AM Good luck in the contest with this beautiful write, Sara. It's nice to work in collaboration with someone. The scenes you depicted are very vivid and lovely. Login to Reply

Akkina Downing Date: 8/16/2017 9:51:00 PM I love every line of this fantastic piece. Not sure where have I been that I didn't read this awesomeness weeks ago. Yes I'm adding it to my faves, you both are amazing :) Login to Reply Sara Ella Date: 8/16/2017 9:56:00 PM Thank you Akkina! We certainly had fun writing this - Rick is an inspiration :)

White Wolf Date: 7/31/2017 10:45:00 AM I can't even tell which is you and me anymore, Sara! LOL... But I really enjoyed writing with you, dear poet! Login to Reply Sara Ella Date: 8/1/2017 10:29:00 PM This was so fun to write with you :) Thank you for this and I hope we can do another one! <3

Silent One Date: 7/17/2017 5:48:00 AM This is an excellent collaboration Sara, it really flows and I can't tell who did which part.. This looks like a winner to me.. Login to Reply

Ravi Sathasivam Date: 7/17/2017 1:31:00 AM Excellent and beautiful write on collaboration. All the best for the contest. Thanks for sharing it. Login to Reply Sara Ella Date: 7/17/2017 9:42:00 PM Thank you Ravi :) It is fun just to work with excellent poets <3

Becca Teagan Date: 7/16/2017 11:40:00 PM I have no idea who Budgie is lol But you two worked very well together! This is very good, peaceful poem. Login to Reply Sara Ella Date: 7/17/2017 9:42:00 PM Thank you Becca :) We had a lot of fun doing this one <3

Andrea Dietrich Date: 7/13/2017 8:14:00 PM this is so lovely, Sara. I have a guess who your partner may have been. I need to check out his poetry and see if it is him! Oh wait I see someone saying his name down here. It WAS Budgie. I just knew it! Login to Reply Sara Ella Date: 7/14/2017 6:34:00 AM Thank you Andrea :) Budgie and I had fun with it!

Lisa Ricci Date: 7/11/2017 12:18:00 PM Good Afternoon Sara. Allow me to simply and briefly say this is extremely beautiful soft and gentle. All is well within your execution and expression. This is poetry. Well done entirely and completely. Have a wonderful afternoon. May this day find you well. Login to Reply Sara Ella Date: 7/11/2017 9:58:00 PM Thank you so much Lisa :) My first contest and really, it is fun to create in collaborations <3

Darren White Date: 7/11/2017 1:55:00 AM Budgie and you did an outstanding job my friend, this is wonderful :) Good luck in the contest! Login to Reply Sara Ella Date: 7/11/2017 7:21:00 AM Thank you Darren :) we had fun in creating it!

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 7/10/2017 6:15:00 PM A very beautiful collaboration! Best of luck in the contest. : ) Login to Reply Sara Ella Date: 7/10/2017 6:17:00 PM Thank you Connie :) This was a fun collaboration with Rick <3

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/10/2017 3:05:00 PM - I enjoy this beautiful co-write, Sara :) - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Sara Ella Date: 7/10/2017 6:17:00 PM Thank you Anne-Lise :) It is my first contest! Rick and I had fun with this one <3

Joseph May Date: 7/10/2017 11:39:00 AM Beautiful collaboration Sara...I like the spiritual connection.. Login to Reply Sara Ella Date: 7/10/2017 12:50:00 PM Thank you Joseph! That is just what Budgie and I were trying to do :)

Tim Smith Date: 7/10/2017 8:26:00 AM A wonderful weave Sara. You and Budgie did great Login to Reply Sara Ella Date: 7/10/2017 12:48:00 PM Thank you Tim :) We had fun with this!

Chris Green Date: 7/10/2017 6:40:00 AM This was beautiful and adventurous and so real feeling. Nature has a little bit of everything and you have shown that. Bravo to both poets...I think I can guess who the second poet was. : ) This was really nice Sara. Best wishes in the contest Login to Reply Sara Ella Date: 7/10/2017 12:47:00 PM Thank you Chris :) Yes this was fun creating with Budgie <3