Coldplay

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Lin Lane

Date: 8/11/2024 3:43:00 AM

Ha David! I don’t think Chris has found his calling yet. I’m glad to see you writing for contests. ;-)

David Kavanagh
Date: 8/11/2024 6:07:00 AM

A little wordplay on Coldplay’s yellow Lin, I did stop entering contests for a while through lack of inspiration, and complex rules, but will always have a go at the less pedantic ones, cheers David

Yann Rolland

Date: 8/11/2024 3:11:00 AM

enjoyed your funny poem yann

David Kavanagh
Date: 8/11/2024 3:26:00 AM

Good to see you Yann, thanks so much for stopping by, I’m delighted you enjoyed this one, cheers David

Tom Cunningham

Date: 8/11/2024 2:34:00 AM

Hope it cools him down. Good luck in the contest David. Enjoy your weekend. Tom

David Kavanagh
Date: 8/12/2024 3:08:00 AM

Tom Cunningham
Date: 8/11/2024 4:19:00 AM

Of course, Chris Martin, Yellow, I'm still waking up lol

David Kavanagh
Date: 8/11/2024 3:24:00 AM

This contest is very limited for Ideas, and takes a bit of lateral thinking, hopefully nobody else spotted the Coldplay angle, cheers David