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Coldplay

Coldplay 

All Chris’s pals started calling him yellow 
He stopped playing ball took up the cello 
His poor head is boiling 
After such a roiling 
Dunking it in the pool, helps him mellow
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Lane Avatar
August 11, 2024 at 3:43 AM
Ha David! I don’t think Chris has found his calling yet. I’m glad to see you writing for contests. ;-)
Kavanagh  Avatar
August 11, 2024 at 6:07 AM
A little wordplay on Coldplay’s yellow Lin, I did stop entering contests for a while through lack of inspiration, and complex rules, but will always have a go at the less pedantic ones, cheers David
Rolland Avatar
August 11, 2024 at 3:11 AM
enjoyed your funny poem yann
Kavanagh  Avatar
August 11, 2024 at 3:26 AM
Good to see you Yann, thanks so much for stopping by, I’m delighted you enjoyed this one, cheers David
Cunningham Avatar
August 11, 2024 at 2:34 AM
Hope it cools him down. Good luck in the contest David. Enjoy your weekend. Tom
Kavanagh  Avatar
August 12, 2024 at 3:08 AM
:)
Cunningham Avatar
August 11, 2024 at 4:19 AM
Of course, Chris Martin, Yellow, I'm still waking up lol
Kavanagh  Avatar
August 11, 2024 at 3:24 AM
This contest is very limited for Ideas, and takes a bit of lateral thinking, hopefully nobody else spotted the Coldplay angle, cheers David
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