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Coldhearted Woman

I ask for so little You refuse to open up your heart Refuse to let me in You turned our love into a game Still think it’s funny With me as your puppet Begging you for more Your heart is cold Your heart is stone All I ever wanted from you Was a smile and a warm word Acknowledgement you cared It never came You turned it to a game A cruel sadistic game Your heart is cold Your heart is stone AP: Honorable Mention 2021 Submitted on November 4, 2019 for contest PALE SHELTER sponsored by JOHN HAMILTON - RANKED 5TH

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Date: 12/7/2019 5:44:00 PM
Congrats on your winning poem Line
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Date: 12/7/2019 11:46:00 PM
Thanks, Gregory. Much appreciated.
Date: 12/7/2019 1:59:00 PM
Thanks Line for this great entry, congrats on a fine placement!
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Date: 12/7/2019 11:46:00 PM
Thanks, John. Most appreciated.
Date: 11/20/2019 5:59:00 AM
number did not come up this time buy another ticket
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Date: 11/20/2019 8:25:00 AM
That's right, Stephen... Next...
Date: 11/4/2019 11:45:00 PM
I feel the pain in this poem. I can relate to it. You are so talented. good Job!
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Date: 11/5/2019 5:13:00 PM
Thanks for your much appreciated compliment, Timothy.
Date: 11/4/2019 11:00:00 AM
Amazing Line it almost sounded like our first fight, lol Great write all the rest are losers this has to be the only winner unless, I enter LOL
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Date: 11/4/2019 6:39:00 PM
You're just a laugh a minute, Bobby. LOL
Date: 11/4/2019 9:49:00 AM
WoW Line, This makes me think of a man I know. Well said,. Now dump the bum and find someone who is worthy of your time. God Bless, JB
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Date: 11/4/2019 10:19:00 AM
LOL - thanks, Judy. This is purely fictional - one of the reasons I used WOMAN in the title. I am married to my prince charming.

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