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Cold Winter Night

The cold air blowing through my frail body, puts goose bumps all over me. Walking through large snow drifts, making time seem longer, and each step taking away my energy. Time drags on into the night, searching for shelter to hide from the bitter cold winds. Finding a cave brings relief, seeing some logs, I start a fire to warm my frozen hands. Looking outside I see blizzard conditions. The warmth of the fire keeps me warm, but will the the logs let me make it through the night or will I freezed like everything else. Will have to make them last, I refuse to die on this bitter cold night. In just a few hours dawn will be here, and I will catch the noon train to Jacksonville, where its been in the 80's all week and not a trace of snow. So this will be my last night and winter in this dreadful place, I will see a new day and smile once again.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/8/2011 11:37:00 AM
I am stopping by today to thank you so much for your kind comments and to let you know I enjoy reading your poetry James. I hope you have a wonderful weekend full of inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/3/2011 4:14:00 PM
Very expressive and descriptive of what some go through in life...Enjoyed reading this one..It was not what I had expected from the title..Thanks for stopping..Your kind comments were so encouraging..Sara
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Date: 2/17/2011 1:14:00 PM
:) Take the invitation and come to Florida, James!
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Date: 2/16/2011 2:05:00 PM
So nice to see your name, James, and what a wonderful poem to find today! Hope you are doing well!! Best wishes! ~ Carrie
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Date: 2/16/2011 1:16:00 PM
Sounds like this winter in Michigan. But then I suppose everyone is getting hit. Keep that fire a burning, Jacksonville in your dreams. Love, Dave
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Date: 2/16/2011 11:43:00 AM
Hi James, welcome back! It's been a while since I've seen you posting new work here. The winter has been rough on people up north. I live about 90 miles south of Jacksonville and it's 62 and cloudy right now. We haven't seen the 80s in a while, but it can happen at any time. Are you really coming to Jacksonville? You'll love the beaches. There's some white sea foam deposited by waves, but that's as close as you'll come to snow. Enjoyed your poem! Love, Carolyn
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