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cold turkey

shall i fly madly and pop more pills ~ or keep walking straight off the hills either way my trip has chills ~ coming down off a high’s the part that kills

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Lin Lane

Date: 2/7/2024 6:54:00 AM

I see your rhyming Monoku are still hitting the bullseye on the target. The only fix I occasionally need is something sweet for a sugar low.

David Kavanagh
Date: 2/7/2024 8:27:00 AM

Thanks so much Lin, I enjoy the challenge of trying to measure them up, sometimes forces me into a serendipitous direction, but often they fail miserably, those sugar fixes are great for restoring equilibrium to a depleted system, always keep the cookie jar handy lol! Cheers David

Tom Cunningham

Date: 2/7/2024 5:31:00 AM

It certainly is David and before you get the shakes you're looking for your next fix. Tom

David Kavanagh
Date: 2/7/2024 6:14:00 AM

Sure thing Tom! Amazing how these artificial euphoric highs, are completely cancelled out by the extreme lows, that’s why I equated it with jumping off a hill and trying to fly, we all know how that would play out! cheers David