Cold Sweats and Tears

I woke in a debilitating fright- 

Cold sweats and tears; 

Night after night- 

My subconscious played on my fears. 


It wasn't short lived... 

In fact, it went on for years.. 


The fear was undoubtedly real 

As was the pain; 

I begged it to yield, 

But still it remained. 


I had sought an escape, 

From what had seemed to me-

As my irrefutable fate;

But oftentimes I'd been too late.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 4/20/2014 5:04:00 PM
Some poetry can be swallowed whole, but yours needs to be consumed bit by bit—savoring each morsel. Tragic in its way, yet not immune from triumph. I enjoyed reading this.
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Date: 2/22/2014 6:32:00 PM
carly, well-expressed...reminds me of my thoughts I penned in "pink vulnerability"
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Date: 2/23/2014 5:00:00 PM
Thank you for taking the time to read my poetry and I appreciate the kind words. I will be returning the favor soon!
Date: 2/22/2014 4:56:00 PM
Wow I loved this Carly...It flowed so well...Tim
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Date: 2/22/2014 1:39:00 PM
Carly good content and it almost verges into rap, I would like to see it go deep into rap....David
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Date: 2/22/2014 7:26:00 AM
A good start, but try to work on not being so predictable.
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Date: 2/22/2014 12:28:00 AM
Easy to read and understand with some nice rhyming.
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Date: 2/21/2014 11:17:00 PM
nice to read. Thanks
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