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Chocolate ice cream, you've been waiting, But my temptation is abating.. I've laid to rest the chocolate ooze, Today, there's another one I choose. Sending regards to both bean and cow, Caramel crunch is my main squeeze now.

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Date: 3/14/2025 6:53:00 PM
LOL
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 3/14/2025 8:30:00 PM
This was light poetry, the kind that makes me hungry. Or maybe I was hungry when I wrote it.
Date: 3/11/2025 2:12:00 AM
Deliciously titbit. Who doesn't love caramel crunch.
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 3/11/2025 5:51:00 AM
It's so delicious on a hot day. Thank you for visiting.
Date: 3/7/2025 9:24:00 AM
Haha love your humour here Hilda....your poem made me smile! Great title also...Love it! Debx
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 3/7/2025 7:32:00 PM
Thank you. It was a silly moment.
Date: 3/4/2025 8:34:00 PM
Delightful! This is fun and lighthearted! Love it!
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 3/5/2025 12:08:00 AM
Welcome to stopping by. It is lighthearted and highly caloric. I call it an ice cream break. Thank you for your sweet comment.
Date: 3/3/2025 11:21:00 AM
Im eating ferrero rocher as i comment on this, i need to stop but cant help it: i love ice cream too. What a yummy and creative write this is dear sweet hilda. I love the rhymes here and how your poem just flows so well! Caramel crunch sounds delicious too.i love how you said " main squeeze" so sweet! Pleasure alwahs reading your poems. Sending you light always
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 3/3/2025 11:37:00 AM
Thank you for such a happiness booster today. There are so many different flavors anymore that it is difficult to choose. I hope you are well and ready for the start of Spring.
Date: 3/1/2025 3:23:00 AM
really delicious, it made me good appetite for changing "habitudes" ( in french) thanks poet
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 3/1/2025 7:19:00 AM
Bon appetit. All my French. Thank you.
Date: 2/28/2025 9:38:00 PM
A playful poem. Change is inevitable with time. Enjoyable write.
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 3/1/2025 1:16:00 AM
Thank you. This was a whimsy poem
Date: 2/27/2025 10:34:00 AM
- :))) ... new day ... trying something new ... wonderful, Hilda :) - hugs
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 2/27/2025 11:04:00 AM
I like your comment. I agree that ice cream is an adventure. Enjoy the sunshine.
Date: 2/27/2025 8:28:00 AM
I love it! Very fun read, i stick with your new choice my friend, Pangie xx
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 2/27/2025 11:02:00 AM
Thank you for your reply. There aren't many who dislike ice cream.
Date: 2/27/2025 6:28:00 AM
lol; never met a dessert I did not like. It's all good!
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 2/27/2025 6:42:00 AM
You're correct. I only met one dessert that I didn't like.
Date: 2/27/2025 3:39:00 AM
Instead of chocolate ice cream, you have decided to switch over to Carmel crunch. It sounds delicious.
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 2/27/2025 6:20:00 AM
Thank you for your comment, Valsa. Caramel is the flavor of the hour.
Date: 2/27/2025 3:05:00 AM
Hello Hilda, trying out new things are fun, you have awoken my tastebuds, give me a caramel anytime. Enjoyed the read. Have a great day, my friend.
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 2/27/2025 6:18:00 AM
I'm aways happy when you like my poems. Thank you, Zyrool.
Date: 2/26/2025 8:07:00 PM
Ha, ha! I like where this is going! Thanks for the smiles. :D
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 2/26/2025 8:25:00 PM
I'm glad you're smiling. Thanks for the visit.
Date: 2/26/2025 7:48:00 PM
A light hearted metaphor for changing desires or relationship .Enjoyed reading.
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 2/26/2025 8:24:00 PM
Thank you for reading. No hidden meaning.here. It's just ice cream.
Date: 2/26/2025 6:19:00 PM
Loving you some caramel crunch! I love heath bar :)
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 2/26/2025 6:21:00 PM
Heath bar is one of the best candies out there. Enjoy the flavor.
Date: 2/26/2025 6:00:00 PM
LOL. Interesting how our tastes change.
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 2/26/2025 6:20:00 PM
They do change. Sometimes a better recipe comes along. Things I liked when young, I no longer care for. Thank you for visiting.
Date: 2/26/2025 5:43:00 PM
Haha, good choice. I like the back story of the bean and cow, it makes you think.
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 2/26/2025 5:55:00 PM
I've been enjoying quite an amount of ice cream, so my next poem might be about Ozempic. I'm glad you enjoyed my poem.
Date: 2/26/2025 5:07:00 PM
It has a lot of character, is energetic, and is fun to read. The rhyme structure is easy to follow, and the playful dichotomy between caramel and chocolate is a nice touch. Amazing work, Hilda!
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 2/26/2025 5:38:00 PM
Thank you. I need to write more food poetry.
Date: 2/26/2025 4:37:00 PM
what a hoot of a poem Hilda I love it brought a smile hugs Shadow
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 2/26/2025 5:37:00 PM
Thank you. It was light poetry.
Date: 2/26/2025 3:25:00 PM
I love it! It's playful, lighthearted, and full of personality. The rhyme scheme flows smoothly, and the contrast between chocolate and caramel adds a fun, almost mischievous tone—like a delicious betrayal. "Sending regards to both bean and cow" is especially clever! It feels like a whimsical breakup poem with a sweet (literally) twist.
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 2/26/2025 4:22:00 PM
Thank you for such a sweet comment.
Date: 2/26/2025 1:19:00 PM
What a fun write. No Chocolate ice cream??? So sad... Have a blessed day............
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 2/26/2025 1:27:00 PM
Chocolate will make a return. As will strawberry when the mood strikes. I am a fickle lover.
Date: 2/26/2025 12:55:00 PM
yum! that sounds delicious, hilda!
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 2/26/2025 1:04:00 PM
Yes, ice cream is popular. I made myself hungry writing this.

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