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Cold Shiver

I
shudder
to think
what
the world
would be
without
the moon
the stars
the sun
without you



AP: Honorable Mention 2020

appreciationhurtlonelinesslonginglossfree verse

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Michelo Mweetwa

November 1, 2019 at 12:06 AM

Sweetest and unforgettable line I have heard in a long time.

Line Gauthier

November 1, 2019 at 4:19 PM

Thanks for the lovely compliment, Michelo.

Caren Krutsinger

October 31, 2019 at 6:11 AM

Darling poem my friend.

Line Gauthier

October 31, 2019 at 8:08 AM

Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Caren.

Timothy Mcguire

October 28, 2019 at 7:48 PM

Lovely, I like this one a lot!

Line Gauthier

October 28, 2019 at 8:12 PM

Thanks, Timothy. Much appreciated.

Mystic Rose Rose

October 28, 2019 at 5:27 AM

Ah, you named some of the most priceless items and people, love it. xo

Line Gauthier

October 28, 2019 at 9:04 AM

Thank you, Pixie. Much appreciated.

Richard Lamoureux

October 27, 2019 at 5:45 PM

I enjoyed this romantic piece.

Line Gauthier

October 27, 2019 at 5:53 PM

Thank you so much, Richard.

Kurt Ravidas

October 27, 2019 at 3:54 PM

A world without stars is like a dream: the stars are not visible in a dream. Although a world with stars is like a dream either)

Line Gauthier

October 27, 2019 at 5:54 PM

Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Kurt.

Ann Foster

October 27, 2019 at 3:28 PM

So simple... so true... so perfect. Hugs. Ann

Line Gauthier

October 27, 2019 at 3:45 PM

Thank you so much for your lovely visit and comment, Ann.

Cold Shiver

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