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Cold Seats

Hail, the vale aches from retraced tattered feet going hither and tither the rambunctious brood, as dawn's golden sleigh race into a sanguine morn, of languishing warmth to sheath from the fleecing errant breeze, of yonder mountaintop, amidst a blanketed respite snow made heavy from the weight of the gods, who sit eyeing the mere mortals workloads that wanes into clear desks and cold seats. Traffic slows in the late afternoon and speeds when loosened while the dusk undresses the night, whose yawns of wearisomeness is inhibited by their backsides while bustling and hustling end, lain ontop of unkept beds.


2020 January 14
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Kamoonpuri Avatar
January 15, 2020 at 12:19 AM
Wow awesome creatively depicted imagery throughout and your word choice is novel and awesome. I like to do rhyming like hustling and bustling and hither and thither in the same line so I enjoyed you did it that way as well. Kudos. Pleez do review/ comment my newest poem too.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
January 15, 2020 at 2:56 AM
I extend my courtesies of appreciation for sharing your kind thoughts~@wk
Leiser Avatar
January 14, 2020 at 8:15 PM
Brilliant!
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
January 14, 2020 at 8:26 PM
Thanks, Laura~@wk
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