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Cold Medicine

my lips are chapping from wind blowing in my face need hot chocolate with marshmallows on the top winter’s magical cure-all
written December 8, 2021

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 12/13/2021 8:58:00 AM
I am playing around with this form (not posted just yet). I like everything about this one. The title, the turn, and of course the chocolate!
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L MILTON HANKINS
Date: 12/13/2021 10:36:00 AM
Thanks, P.S. Best of luck in your "playing around." I'll look for it.
Date: 12/10/2021 7:05:00 AM
There's nothing more soothing on a cold damp night... well, almost nothing. Love this one, Milt.
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L MILTON HANKINS
Date: 12/10/2021 8:51:00 AM
Thanks, Lin. Yes, I can think of other things, but hot chocolate is right up near the top!
Date: 12/9/2021 2:19:00 AM
A lovely tanka. I have tried four for the first time but I am not sure they are up to standard.
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L MILTON HANKINS
Date: 12/9/2021 9:12:00 AM
Hey, Victor, make your own standard. I have been altering the old forms (just a tiny bit) when I feel I need to. It's my party, right?