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Cold Lunch

trembling cold sun
grasshopper snaps hurried flight
nibbling iced grass

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/1/2009 3:08:00 PM
Nice one James. . .showing your talent in so many ways. I feel the cold of winter approaching.
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Date: 8/25/2009 6:39:00 PM
Excellent work Jimbo, love the title and idea of this haiku...Raul
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Date: 8/24/2009 1:04:00 PM
This one made me go grab a sweatshirt! :) !!! Nicely done, James!! ~ Carrie
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Date: 8/21/2009 6:26:00 PM
again i say stop it with the winter. john
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Date: 8/21/2009 10:15:00 AM
Great haiku James I could see him munching - God Bless, MJ
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Date: 8/21/2009 1:29:00 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest Jim.Rgds Brian
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Date: 8/20/2009 9:25:00 PM
wonderful picture and feelings within this piece very well completed,,and Thank you for visiting and leaving your welcomed comment,,blessings..Cecil
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Date: 8/20/2009 7:10:00 PM
Wonderful imagery! and the title works so well! Great Hiaku James! ~Tru~
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Date: 8/20/2009 5:45:00 PM
excellent picture here ... great job :)
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Date: 8/20/2009 3:58:00 PM
Love the title..wonderful haiku
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Date: 8/20/2009 2:58:00 PM
I feel for that grasshopper. Very descriptive. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 8/20/2009 2:50:00 PM
cold,cold and cold --very cold haiku,it is so cold i can imagine myself writing it and it nearly feel like a senryu--yet it is a haiku so my mind is a t rest,my friend is ok:)well penned Jimmy--EXCELLENT--CHARMA
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