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Cold Lunch

trembling cold sun grasshopper snaps hurried flight nibbling iced grass

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Anthony Nutter

Date: 9/1/2009 3:08:00 PM

Nice one James. . .showing your talent in so many ways. I feel the cold of winter approaching.

Raul Moreno

Date: 8/25/2009 6:39:00 PM

Excellent work Jimbo, love the title and idea of this haiku...Raul

Carrie Richards

Date: 8/24/2009 1:04:00 PM

This one made me go grab a sweatshirt! :) !!! Nicely done, James!! ~ Carrie

John Loving Iii

Date: 8/21/2009 6:26:00 PM

again i say stop it with the winter. john

Michael Jordan

Date: 8/21/2009 10:15:00 AM

Great haiku James I could see him munching - God Bless, MJ

Brian Strand

Date: 8/21/2009 1:29:00 AM

Thank you for supporting my contest Jim.Rgds Brian

Cecil Hickman

Date: 8/20/2009 9:25:00 PM

wonderful picture and feelings within this piece very well completed,,and Thank you for visiting and leaving your welcomed comment,,blessings..Cecil

Trudy Diane Rider

Date: 8/20/2009 7:10:00 PM

Wonderful imagery! and the title works so well! Great Hiaku James! ~Tru~

James Knox

Date: 8/20/2009 5:45:00 PM

excellent picture here ... great job :)

Christopher Higgins

Date: 8/20/2009 3:58:00 PM

Love the title..wonderful haiku

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/20/2009 2:58:00 PM

I feel for that grasshopper. Very descriptive. Keep writing. Sara

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 8/20/2009 2:50:00 PM

cold,cold and cold --very cold haiku,it is so cold i can imagine myself writing it and it nearly feel like a senryu--yet it is a haiku so my mind is a t rest,my friend is ok:)well penned Jimmy--EXCELLENT--CHARMA