Cold Heart

For years she thought his heart would warm up,
and open the door for her world.  It felt like walking
in summer clothes in the north pole,
whenever she touched his chest;
she couldn't sigh, breathe or move.
It's as though he was afraid her hands would
melt his frozen heart,
and unravel his secrets.
Sometimes she joked, and asked him whether
he was an Iceman in his past life,
which he shrugged off,
as hailstorms gathered in his eyes.
Every day the space between them was becoming colder
and wider; she couldn't tell between winter
and summer anymore.....
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Hamilton Avatar
December 19, 2016 at 5:06 PM
Hailstones gathered in his eyes, Wow, great imagery Teddy, well done, one of your best I think.
Kimathi Avatar
December 21, 2016 at 12:57 AM
Thank you so much John, for enjoying my piece!! ;-)
Nusker Avatar
December 13, 2016 at 6:47 AM
A work of art, Teddy. I love it. A 7 & a fav.
Kimathi Avatar
December 15, 2016 at 2:34 AM
Wow!!! Thank you so much, Afzal!! *^_^*
Y. Avatar
December 1, 2016 at 8:00 AM
Hi Teddy,weed# This is sad and beautifully written. The imagery is good. Congratulations on your fine win.It was deserved:-) Alexis
Kimathi Avatar
December 2, 2016 at 3:02 AM
Hi Alexis. These are some o my rare works, which emanate from my soul.... Thank you so much for your applause, and continuous morale support!! :-)
Carmack Avatar
December 1, 2016 at 3:50 AM
Congrats Teddy!
Kimathi Avatar
December 2, 2016 at 2:59 AM
Thank you so much, Rob!! :-)
Gupta Avatar
December 1, 2016 at 3:43 AM
I agree with Jan ... your imagery and metaphor are lovely ...it is here that poetry resides ... not in narratives ... very nice ... well deserved win ... congratulations ...
Kimathi Avatar
December 2, 2016 at 2:56 AM
Greetings, Probir. Thank you so much for your kind applause, and continuous morale support!! :-)
Allison Avatar
November 30, 2016 at 5:54 PM
such powerful imagery Teddy "Every day the space between them was becoming colder and wider; she couldn't tell between winter and summer anymore....." oh I love these lines! Congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Kimathi Avatar
December 2, 2016 at 2:06 AM
Hi Jan. Sorry, Florence' reply jumped. I'm glad those lines grabbed your emotions.... Thank you for your warm applause!! *^_^*
Kimathi Avatar
December 1, 2016 at 8:03 AM
Thank you for reading and enjoying my piece, FJ!! *^_^* I'm glad to hear from you again!! ;-)
Negron Flores Avatar
November 30, 2016 at 5:06 PM
Congratulations Teddy in the placement of the contest.
Kimathi Avatar
December 1, 2016 at 7:59 AM
Thank you so much for your applause, Nayda!! *^_^* It was an awesome contest!! ;-)
Rycroft Avatar
November 29, 2016 at 8:48 AM
Great poem teddy liked it very much x
Kimathi Avatar
December 1, 2016 at 7:57 AM
Thank you, Wendy!! *^_^*
Vinson Avatar
November 29, 2016 at 5:45 AM
A powerful and lyrical story, Teddy.
Kimathi Avatar
December 1, 2016 at 7:56 AM
Thank you for your kind comment, Doug!! :-)
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