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Cold Heart - Monoku

freezing rain embalms cold heart ~ pellucid shell fissures with warm beating 12/23/2017 Written for Monoku Contest Sponser: Silent One

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Date: 1/7/2018 5:39:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Judy, a very deserving win on this brilliant Monoku...Maria xx
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Date: 1/3/2018 9:53:00 AM
You are really good at these.
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Judith S
Date: 1/3/2018 9:57:00 AM
Awh ... thank you Richard!! :)
Date: 1/2/2018 2:30:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Judith.
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Judith S
Date: 1/2/2018 5:18:00 PM
Thank you Line!!!
Date: 12/28/2017 7:54:00 PM
Happy New year. I see congrats are in order for this tremendous piece.
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Judith S
Date: 1/2/2018 10:34:00 AM
Thank you Richard! Happy New Year to you as well!!!
Date: 12/28/2017 5:25:00 PM
Poignant poetry, love this, congrats in contest, and a Happy New Year, Judith.
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Judith S
Date: 1/2/2018 10:35:00 AM
Thank you soooo much Harry! And Happy New Year wishes to you and your family as well! ~ Judy
Date: 12/28/2017 4:36:00 AM
Rich and deep ... Congratulations ....
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Judith S
Date: 1/2/2018 10:40:00 AM
Thank you for your kind comment Probir! Happy New Year to you! ~Judy
Date: 12/27/2017 10:35:00 PM
So well-penned. Congrats Judith. Merry Christmas
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Judith S
Date: 1/2/2018 10:41:00 AM
Thank you dear Anish for your nice comment! Happy New Year to you and your family! Best, Judy
Date: 12/27/2017 8:43:00 PM
congratulations on your win, Judith, nicely done. hugs eve
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Judith S
Date: 1/2/2018 10:43:00 AM
Thank you kind lady :) Happy New Year!!! ~ Judy
Date: 12/27/2017 7:56:00 PM
Congrats on your win Judith
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Date: 1/2/2018 10:44:00 AM
Thanks Joseph!! Happy New Year !!!!
Date: 12/27/2017 7:45:00 AM
A meaningful one-liner, Judith; there is always hope, even for cold hearts! ~ Congratulations on your podium finish. Regards // paul
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Date: 12/27/2017 12:53:00 AM
Wise words Judith.
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Date: 12/26/2017 10:22:00 PM
A potent penning! Congratulations on your win Judith :) xomo!
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Date: 12/26/2017 9:31:00 PM
Great to come here again and tell you CONGRATULATIONS. Awesome win, Judith.
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Date: 12/26/2017 8:57:00 PM
And congratulations to you Judy!! Excellent!!
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Date: 12/26/2017 8:25:00 PM
Lovely, Judith - congrats on your win.
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Judith S
Date: 1/2/2018 10:31:00 AM
Thank you Agnes!!!
Date: 12/26/2017 7:40:00 PM
Returning with congratulations Judy for your top win with this beautiful and meaningful write. ~Susan
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Judith S
Date: 12/26/2017 7:56:00 PM
Thank you dear Susan :)
Date: 12/26/2017 4:07:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Judith! Janice
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Judith S
Date: 12/26/2017 7:52:00 PM
Thank you Janice!!
Date: 12/26/2017 3:51:00 PM
Hey super congratulations on ur write winning Judy
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Judith S
Date: 12/26/2017 7:51:00 PM
Thank you Lewis!!! ;P
Date: 12/26/2017 3:05:00 PM
Congratulations Judith, well done...
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Judith S
Date: 12/26/2017 7:46:00 PM
Thank you Charlie!!!
Date: 12/26/2017 2:55:00 PM
- Congratulations on your 1st place in the contest, Judith ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Judith S
Date: 12/26/2017 7:46:00 PM
Thank you so much Anne-Lise !!
Date: 12/26/2017 1:32:00 PM
This is excellent, the heart is thawed through love and warmth... Congratulations on your first place in the Monoku 1 contest Judy..
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Judith S
Date: 12/26/2017 5:56:00 PM
Thank you so much for your comments Silent One .. and for the honor of being amongst the first place wins in your contest!
Date: 12/24/2017 4:17:00 PM
Not familiar with a monoku... I'm a Humorick man!!! Merry Ho Ho dear Judith S xxxxxxx
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Judith S
Date: 12/26/2017 5:55:00 PM
Well my dear Jack ... that's because you are THE limerick man!!! Yes .. my monoku is too heavy for you. You are definitely a man of humor. Thanks for visiting :)
Date: 12/23/2017 8:11:00 PM
very descriptive, Judith. I enjoyed seeing this one. Merry Christmas to you too.
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Judith S
Date: 12/26/2017 5:47:00 PM
Thank you Andrea!! :)
Date: 12/23/2017 5:29:00 PM
A deep and meaningful Monoku Judy. Excellent imagery and beautiful language dear friend. Best wishes in the contest.. ~Susan
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Judith S
Date: 12/26/2017 5:48:00 PM
Thank you Susan!! :)
Date: 12/23/2017 5:19:00 PM
Precious words..deep meaning..Your thought Judy made me think..best for a win!
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Judith S
Date: 12/23/2017 5:27:00 PM
Thank you Vijay for your kind comments and wishes.
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