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Cold Heart - Monoku

freezing rain embalms cold heart ~ pellucid shell fissures with warm beating 12/23/2017 Written for Monoku Contest Sponser: Silent One

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Maria Williams

Date: 1/7/2018 5:39:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Judy, a very deserving win on this brilliant Monoku...Maria xx

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/3/2018 9:53:00 AM

You are really good at these.

Judith S
Date: 1/3/2018 9:57:00 AM

Awh ... thank you Richard!! :)

Line Gauthier

Date: 1/2/2018 2:30:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Judith.

Judith S
Date: 1/2/2018 5:18:00 PM

Thank you Line!!!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/28/2017 7:54:00 PM

Happy New year. I see congrats are in order for this tremendous piece.

Judith S
Date: 1/2/2018 10:34:00 AM

Thank you Richard! Happy New Year to you as well!!!

Harry Horsman

Date: 12/28/2017 5:25:00 PM

Poignant poetry, love this, congrats in contest, and a Happy New Year, Judith.

Judith S
Date: 1/2/2018 10:35:00 AM

Thank you soooo much Harry! And Happy New Year wishes to you and your family as well! ~ Judy

Probir Gupta

Date: 12/28/2017 4:36:00 AM

Rich and deep ... Congratulations ....

Judith S
Date: 1/2/2018 10:40:00 AM

Thank you for your kind comment Probir! Happy New Year to you! ~Judy

Anisha Dutta

Date: 12/27/2017 10:35:00 PM

So well-penned. Congrats Judith. Merry Christmas

Judith S
Date: 1/2/2018 10:41:00 AM

Thank you dear Anish for your nice comment! Happy New Year to you and your family! Best, Judy

Eve Roper

Date: 12/27/2017 8:43:00 PM

congratulations on your win, Judith, nicely done. hugs eve

Judith S
Date: 1/2/2018 10:43:00 AM

Thank you kind lady :) Happy New Year!!! ~ Judy

Joseph May

Date: 12/27/2017 7:56:00 PM

Congrats on your win Judith

Judith S
Date: 1/2/2018 10:44:00 AM

Thanks Joseph!! Happy New Year !!!!

Paul Callus

Date: 12/27/2017 7:45:00 AM

A meaningful one-liner, Judith; there is always hope, even for cold hearts! ~ Congratulations on your podium finish. Regards // paul

James Inman

Date: 12/27/2017 12:53:00 AM

Wise words Judith.

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 12/26/2017 10:22:00 PM

A potent penning! Congratulations on your win Judith :) xomo!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/26/2017 9:31:00 PM

Great to come here again and tell you CONGRATULATIONS. Awesome win, Judith.

Mike Gentile

Date: 12/26/2017 8:57:00 PM

And congratulations to you Judy!! Excellent!!

Agnes Krampe

Date: 12/26/2017 8:25:00 PM

Lovely, Judith - congrats on your win.

Judith S
Date: 1/2/2018 10:31:00 AM

Thank you Agnes!!!

Susan Ashley

Date: 12/26/2017 7:40:00 PM

Returning with congratulations Judy for your top win with this beautiful and meaningful write. ~Susan

Judith S
Date: 12/26/2017 7:56:00 PM

Thank you dear Susan :)

Janice Canerdy

Date: 12/26/2017 4:07:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Judith! Janice

Judith S
Date: 12/26/2017 7:52:00 PM

Thank you Janice!!

Lewis Raynes

Date: 12/26/2017 3:51:00 PM

Hey super congratulations on ur write winning Judy

Judith S
Date: 12/26/2017 7:51:00 PM

Thank you Lewis!!! ;P

Charlie Smith

Date: 12/26/2017 3:05:00 PM

Congratulations Judith, well done...

Judith S
Date: 12/26/2017 7:46:00 PM

Thank you Charlie!!!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/26/2017 2:55:00 PM

- Congratulations on your 1st place in the contest, Judith ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Judith S
Date: 12/26/2017 7:46:00 PM

Thank you so much Anne-Lise !!

Silent One

Date: 12/26/2017 1:32:00 PM

This is excellent, the heart is thawed through love and warmth... Congratulations on your first place in the Monoku 1 contest Judy..

Judith S
Date: 12/26/2017 5:56:00 PM

Thank you so much for your comments Silent One .. and for the honor of being amongst the first place wins in your contest!

Jack Ellison

Date: 12/24/2017 4:17:00 PM

Not familiar with a monoku... I'm a Humorick man!!! Merry Ho Ho dear Judith S xxxxxxx

Judith S
Date: 12/26/2017 5:55:00 PM

Well my dear Jack ... that's because you are THE limerick man!!! Yes .. my monoku is too heavy for you. You are definitely a man of humor. Thanks for visiting :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/23/2017 8:11:00 PM

very descriptive, Judith. I enjoyed seeing this one. Merry Christmas to you too.

Judith S
Date: 12/26/2017 5:47:00 PM

Thank you Andrea!! :)

Susan Ashley

Date: 12/23/2017 5:29:00 PM

A deep and meaningful Monoku Judy. Excellent imagery and beautiful language dear friend. Best wishes in the contest.. ~Susan

Judith S
Date: 12/26/2017 5:48:00 PM

Thank you Susan!! :)