Cold Harbor Cathedrals

(Cold Harbor, Virginia, May 31-June 12, 1864;
1,845 Union dead, 788 Confederate dead)
	
	
	
	cathedrals rise,
tall arching boughs, crisscrossing limbs,
lush, leafy rooftops lofted high
and rustled by warm tender breeze;
green rooftops shimmer, reverent,
while casting shade to consecrate
this hallowed ground,
	this battlefield,
topography forever scarred
by trench and earthworks dug in haste
scratched out for fear and valor's sake,
	grave-deep furrows
		once harbor to 
depleted men far from their homes
who wept and moaned and fought, survived,
sad ditch and trench from which strong trunks
loft high the ceiling's verdant vault
while saplings bend in pensive prayer,
roots buried in brown detritus
discarded by last autumn's chill,
dark moldered leaves
now slowly melting into earth
where men once battled, suffered, died…
	to ash from ash,
		cathedrals rise


November 15, 2022
The Crap Shoot #2 Poetry Contest
John Lawless, sponsor
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Radice Avatar
December 15, 2022 at 10:27 AM
This is such a wonderful read David. Striking and beautifully written. "..who wept and moaned and fought, survived," "to ash from ash"..great lines. Your poem deserves so many more comments that it has garnered so far. I'm off to read more of your poetry. Congratulations in John's contest. Cheers - Gary
Bose Avatar
December 16, 2022 at 5:03 AM
Thank you, Gary. I visited the battlefield several months ago and this wrote itself in the ensuing weeks. I appreciate your comments. Many thanks and Merry Christmas! Dave
Lawless Avatar
December 13, 2022 at 12:27 PM
...to ash from ash, cathedrals rise...WOW....AND A DOUBLE WOW. Beautifully written lament on the passing of 2,633 soldiers.
Bose Avatar
December 14, 2022 at 4:54 AM
Many thanks, John. Walking this battlefield really makes a person reflect ... the earthworks and trenches still exist beneath that "cathedral" of trees. I appreciate all the time and effort you've put into holding this contest. Thanks, Dave
Rodrigues Avatar
November 15, 2022 at 9:04 PM
Great write, David!
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