Cold Harbor Cathedrals

(Cold Harbor, Virginia, May 31-June 12, 1864;
1,845 Union dead, 788 Confederate dead)
	
	
	
	cathedrals rise,
tall arching boughs, crisscrossing limbs,
lush, leafy rooftops lofted high
and rustled by warm tender breeze;
green rooftops shimmer, reverent,
while casting shade to consecrate
this hallowed ground,
	this battlefield,
topography forever scarred
by trench and earthworks dug in haste
scratched out for fear and valor's sake,
	grave-deep furrows
		once harbor to 
depleted men far from their homes
who wept and moaned and fought, survived,
sad ditch and trench from which strong trunks
loft high the ceiling's verdant vault
while saplings bend in pensive prayer,
roots buried in brown detritus
discarded by last autumn's chill,
dark moldered leaves
now slowly melting into earth
where men once battled, suffered, died…
	to ash from ash,
		cathedrals rise


November 15, 2022
The Crap Shoot #2 Poetry Contest
John Lawless, sponsor

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 12/15/2022 10:27:00 AM
This is such a wonderful read David. Striking and beautifully written. "..who wept and moaned and fought, survived," "to ash from ash"..great lines. Your poem deserves so many more comments that it has garnered so far. I'm off to read more of your poetry. Congratulations in John's contest. Cheers - Gary
Login to Reply
Bose Avatar
David Bose
Date: 12/16/2022 5:03:00 AM
Thank you, Gary. I visited the battlefield several months ago and this wrote itself in the ensuing weeks. I appreciate your comments. Many thanks and Merry Christmas! Dave
Date: 12/13/2022 12:27:00 PM
...to ash from ash, cathedrals rise...WOW....AND A DOUBLE WOW. Beautifully written lament on the passing of 2,633 soldiers.
Login to Reply
Bose Avatar
David Bose
Date: 12/14/2022 4:54:00 AM
Many thanks, John. Walking this battlefield really makes a person reflect ... the earthworks and trenches still exist beneath that "cathedral" of trees. I appreciate all the time and effort you've put into holding this contest. Thanks, Dave
Date: 11/15/2022 9:04:00 PM
Great write, David!
Login to Reply
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetics
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter