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Cold Harbor Cathedrals

(Cold Harbor, Virginia, May 31-June 12, 1864; 1,845 Union dead, 788 Confederate dead) cathedrals rise, tall arching boughs, crisscrossing limbs, lush, leafy rooftops lofted high and rustled by warm tender breeze; green rooftops shimmer, reverent, while casting shade to consecrate this hallowed ground, this battlefield, topography forever scarred by trench and earthworks dug in haste scratched out for fear and valor's sake, grave-deep furrows once harbor to depleted men far from their homes who wept and moaned and fought, survived, sad ditch and trench from which strong trunks loft high the ceiling's verdant vault while saplings bend in pensive prayer, roots buried in brown detritus discarded by last autumn's chill, dark moldered leaves now slowly melting into earth where men once battled, suffered, died… to ash from ash, cathedrals rise November 15, 2022 The Crap Shoot #2 Poetry Contest John Lawless, sponsor

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Date: 12/15/2022 10:27:00 AM
This is such a wonderful read David. Striking and beautifully written. "..who wept and moaned and fought, survived," "to ash from ash"..great lines. Your poem deserves so many more comments that it has garnered so far. I'm off to read more of your poetry. Congratulations in John's contest. Cheers - Gary
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David Bose
Date: 12/16/2022 5:03:00 AM
Thank you, Gary. I visited the battlefield several months ago and this wrote itself in the ensuing weeks. I appreciate your comments. Many thanks and Merry Christmas! Dave
Date: 12/13/2022 12:27:00 PM
...to ash from ash, cathedrals rise...WOW....AND A DOUBLE WOW. Beautifully written lament on the passing of 2,633 soldiers.
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David Bose
Date: 12/14/2022 4:54:00 AM
Many thanks, John. Walking this battlefield really makes a person reflect ... the earthworks and trenches still exist beneath that "cathedral" of trees. I appreciate all the time and effort you've put into holding this contest. Thanks, Dave
Date: 11/15/2022 9:04:00 PM
Great write, David!
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