John Lawless Poet Verse

Cold Embrace - Waltz Wave

COLD EMBRACE


Cold                
embrace
long
stolen
from my arms.       
Tempted
love
too weak,
succumbing
without remorse,
betrayal                         
without
cause.
Lusting’s
rendezvous
seeking
heat
without
fire.


6/10/2015

for Kim Merryman - Waltz Wave Poetry Contest

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Eve Roper June 18, 2015 at 6:41 PM congratulations on your wonderful win. Hugs Eve

Jan Allison June 18, 2015 at 1:57 PM a dark waltz indeed many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx

Skat A June 18, 2015 at 12:59 PM sweet John, Congratulations on your win. Love **SKAT**

Casarah Nance June 18, 2015 at 11:49 AM Dark and a delight to read, your uniqueness stands out in the crowd :-)

Jaycee Cervenka June 17, 2015 at 11:47 PM Like the parker element of desire in the waltz. Congratulations on your win. Jan

Andrea Dietrich June 17, 2015 at 11:14 PM Yours is a darker look at the waltz of the heart! Congrats for the fine win, John.

Kim Merryman June 17, 2015 at 6:09 PM John, congrats on placing 3rd in my contest! You said so much in so few words. Great write, though sad. Well done! Love, Kim

Constance La France June 16, 2015 at 12:01 PM John, I am still floating on your wave, 7,and thanks for visiting my poem, Beware

Richard Lamoureux June 14, 2015 at 9:36 AM When you have a chance check out our group poem, it is now finished.

Richard Lamoureux June 14, 2015 at 9:36 AM I was swept away by this one.