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Flowers, Crocuses, Spring, Snow, Greens

crocuses withstand March winds dressed in snowflakes- shivering 3/20/2021 'Lets Get Creative With Haiku' Contest Sponsor: Constance La France

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Date: 3/24/2021 3:20:00 PM
Janis, congratulations on your win in my challenge Let's Get Creative with Haiku and you did exactly that, I love this excellent non traditional Haiku, well done _Constance
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Date: 3/24/2021 8:31:00 AM
Always a pleasure to see the first blooms and to consider what they endure. Beautiful presentation! Congratulations!
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Date: 3/23/2021 3:01:00 AM
The first signs of spring. Those and daffodils. I always wonder how they can withstand the cold days when spring is but a whisper ... Congratulations on your top win, Janis :)) ~Sus
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Date: 3/22/2021 5:34:00 PM
absolutely brilliant Janis, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Janis Thompson
Date: 3/22/2021 10:21:00 PM
Thanks Jan. I see these shivering flowers every year.
Date: 3/22/2021 4:32:00 PM
I like this, Janis! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 3/22/2021 2:15:00 PM
awesome personification! Congrats.
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Janis Thompson
Date: 3/22/2021 10:21:00 PM
Thanks and blessings. Janis
Date: 3/22/2021 1:47:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning poem. Kind wishes, Kai
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Date: 3/22/2021 12:46:00 PM
- Congratulations on your first place in the contest, crocus in snow is a beautiful picture in the spring Janis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Janis Thompson
Date: 3/22/2021 10:22:00 PM
Thanks Sunshine. Blessings and much love, Janis.
Date: 3/20/2021 10:45:00 AM
They really do seem to handle cold weather, Janis. Absolutely love this haiku! Best wishes for a win, Carolyn
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Janis Thompson
Date: 3/22/2021 10:23:00 PM
I watch them shiver every year. They make me cold. Love and blessings, Janis.
Date: 3/20/2021 10:02:00 AM
I can see this and feel it too. Well written Janis :)
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Janis Thompson
Date: 3/22/2021 10:23:00 PM
Thanks and blessings to you Heidi. Janis

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