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Flowers, Crocuses, Spring, Snow, Greens

crocuses 
          withstand March winds
dressed
         in snowflakes-
                         shivering

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Constance La France
Date: 3/24/2021 3:20:00 PM
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Janis, congratulations on your win in my challenge Let's Get Creative with Haiku and you did exactly that, I love this excellent non traditional Haiku, well done _Constance
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Juliet Ligon
Date: 3/24/2021 8:31:00 AM
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Always a pleasure to see the first blooms and to consider what they endure. Beautiful presentation! Congratulations!
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Suzette Richards
Date: 3/23/2021 3:01:00 AM
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The first signs of spring. Those and daffodils. I always wonder how they can withstand the cold days when spring is but a whisper ... Congratulations on your top win, Janis :)) ~Sus
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Jan Allison
Date: 3/22/2021 5:34:00 PM
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absolutely brilliant Janis, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 3/22/2021 10:21:00 PM
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Thanks Jan. I see these shivering flowers every year.
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Kim Merryman
Date: 3/22/2021 4:32:00 PM
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I like this, Janis! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 3/22/2021 2:15:00 PM
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awesome personification! Congrats.
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 3/22/2021 10:21:00 PM
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Thanks and blessings. Janis
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 3/22/2021 1:47:00 PM
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Congratulations on your winning poem. Kind wishes, Kai
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/22/2021 12:46:00 PM
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- Congratulations on your first place in the contest, crocus in snow is a beautiful picture in the spring Janis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 3/22/2021 10:22:00 PM
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Thanks Sunshine. Blessings and much love, Janis.
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 3/20/2021 10:45:00 AM
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They really do seem to handle cold weather, Janis. Absolutely love this haiku! Best wishes for a win, Carolyn
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 3/22/2021 10:23:00 PM
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I watch them shiver every year. They make me cold. Love and blessings, Janis.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 3/20/2021 10:02:00 AM
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I can see this and feel it too. Well written Janis :)
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 3/22/2021 10:23:00 PM
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Thanks and blessings to you Heidi. Janis
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