Cold, Cold Hank (1924-1953)

The saddest man you ever saw
Sang through his nose, his notes were raw,
His teeth were bad, his voice was flat;
Hank Williams wore a cowboy hat.

A hundred songs upon the shelf,
He loved us more than loved himself:
He sang of you, he sang of me,
To set our shackled spirits free.

His tritest titles bragged of pain,
“Your Cheatin’ Heart,” “You Win Again,”
And “Weary Blues,” “I Saw The Light,”
And “There’ll Be No Teardrops Tonight.”

He loved to drink, but he loved more
Composing melodies meant for
The words he couldn’t always spell,
But sang so well that they still sell.

A limousine, gold in the bank,
Were not enough to ease old Hank:
He cursed his loves, and feared his Lord
Would pay him back the debts he stored.

The debts were cleared on New Year’s Day,
The coroner could only say
That chloral hydrate took its toll
From Hank’s poor self-tormented soul.

You hear that yodeled freight-train whine?
It’s just a ghost, aged twenty-nine,
That left his flesh in ‘Fifty-Three,
But still he haunts Montgomery.


Hank Williams repeated the above form in nearly all his songs some of which are included
in the above verse.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 11/1/2009 5:35:00 AM
'Hey, Good Looking', I like your wordplay here, right on the title itself. Cold, cold Hank who wrote 'Cold, Cold Heart' which was a hit for Tony Bennett. But I guess you missed out on some of his other classics, i.e. 'I'm So Lonesome I Could Cry' and 'I Can't Help It If I'm Still In Love With You', just to name a few. Oh well...
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Date: 11/1/2009 1:07:00 AM
Thank for supporting my contest Steve.Rgds Brian
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