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Cold Broken

Love never a Victory march always a cold and broken Truth lies within the unspoken the eyes depth of a untold story Hallelujah cried in the shattered voice no mercy given nor heard willing to risk it all for a broken soul no song left to sing A love taken or revived within a lifeless beating heart yes it remains cold it remains broken Hallelujah cried never heard ~

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Karl Marszalowicz

Date: 8/11/2016 8:02:00 PM

Okay, you got one tear from me try for two and then make me cry a river.

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 1/28/2015 10:06:00 PM

just popped by to say hello dear pal hope alls well with you

Shanity Rain
Date: 8/18/2015 10:31:00 AM

Always smiling when I think of ya lad~~

Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper

Date: 11/29/2014 3:15:00 AM

Well, well...still writing the good stuff I see. :D Very nice poem here, you captured a lot of emotion in only a few words. Hope your holiday was great, and hope you're doing well. MC

Shanity Rain
Date: 8/18/2015 10:31:00 AM

thank-you one of my Favorite New yorkers! Love yas, come home safe.

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 9/30/2014 1:04:00 PM

love is forever beautiful turn towards the light dear friend touching excellent pen passing you a smile

Shanity Rain
Date: 10/1/2014 1:45:00 AM

you are so much a encouraging friend , many Thanks Liam!

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/30/2014 6:33:00 PM

smiling never kissed it but my mum says to my sisters you kiss a few frogs before you get the right one

Shanity Rain
Date: 9/30/2014 6:16:00 PM

now this is why my Grandma said "child..or Lass , you watch out for those boys who kissed The Blarney Stone ~ you silver tongued devil !