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Cold Broken

Love never a Victory march
     always a cold and broken

    Truth lies within the unspoken
      the eyes depth of a untold story

    Hallelujah cried in the shattered voice
      no mercy given nor heard      
  
    willing to risk it all for a broken soul
      no song left to sing    
  
    A love taken or revived within a lifeless beating heart
        yes it remains cold it remains broken  

     Hallelujah cried never heard ~

Copyright © Shanity Rain | Year Posted 2014

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Karl Marszalowicz Date: 8/11/2016 8:02:00 PM Okay, you got one tear from me try for two and then make me cry a river. Login to Reply

Liam Mcdaid Date: 1/28/2015 10:06:00 PM just popped by to say hello dear pal hope alls well with you Login to Reply Shanity Rain Date: 8/18/2015 10:31:00 AM Always smiling when I think of ya lad~~

Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper Date: 11/29/2014 3:15:00 AM Well, well...still writing the good stuff I see. :D Very nice poem here, you captured a lot of emotion in only a few words. Hope your holiday was great, and hope you're doing well. MC Login to Reply Shanity Rain Date: 8/18/2015 10:31:00 AM thank-you one of my Favorite New yorkers! Love yas, come home safe.

Liam Mcdaid Date: 9/30/2014 1:04:00 PM love is forever beautiful turn towards the light dear friend touching excellent pen passing you a smile Login to Reply Shanity Rain Date: 10/1/2014 1:45:00 AM you are so much a encouraging friend , many Thanks Liam! Liam Mcdaid Date: 9/30/2014 6:33:00 PM smiling never kissed it but my mum says to my sisters you kiss a few frogs before you get the right one Shanity Rain Date: 9/30/2014 6:16:00 PM now this is why my Grandma said "child..or Lass , you watch out for those boys who kissed The Blarney Stone ~ you silver tongued devil !