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Cola Slurpees For the Soul

A bad day at the 7-11
The cola slurpee's not working again!
I don't want cherry,
Grape, or strawberry - 
Only cola gives me that peace-like zen!


10/30/11

depressionhealthlosspeacelimerick

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David Williams

June 13, 2012 at 7:24 AM

Susan congrats on your win..David

Kim Merryman

June 12, 2012 at 9:13 PM

Congrats on your win, Susan! Love, Kim

Jonas L. Rozario

June 12, 2012 at 8:23 AM

Congrats on your awesome win Susan... enjoyed your limerick.

Carol Sunshine Brown

June 12, 2012 at 7:59 AM

Congratulations on your placement in SKAT's "Any old or new Limerick" contest Susan. Love, Carol

Ralph Taylor

June 11, 2012 at 8:33 PM

Congrats, Susan. Outstanding. Great job. Nice going. hugs, Ralph

Ralph Taylor

June 11, 2012 at 8:02 PM

Congrats, Susan. Excellent. Nice going. Hugs, Ralph

Poet Destroyer A

June 11, 2012 at 12:57 PM

SUSAN... XOX, , CONGRATS WITH YOUR AWESOME LIMERICK IN SKAT'S CONTEST,,, XOX~PD

Andrea Dietrich

November 3, 2011 at 9:33 PM

Yaaaaay, another win for you. Congrats on this scrumptious one!

Dinda Minardi

November 3, 2011 at 9:05 AM

This is very witty, Susan... hahaha... Congrats on your win :)

Andrea Dietrich

November 2, 2011 at 10:40 PM

good,I can see from a comment below that you won with this one. I think cola slurpee's are GREAT . Better than a diet coke,but with calories (so I don't drink them). I'm calling it a night, susan. Glad I remembered to see one of your poems before going off! Luv,Andrea

Nancy Jones

November 1, 2011 at 3:30 PM

Whoowee, yep, I know that feelin'. Bad one for me is when the 'lectricity's flipped on the coffee pot at work and I gotta wait like ten minutes or somethin' before I can brew. Nice write, Susan, grats!namaste~N