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Cola Slurpees for the Soul

A bad day at the 7-11 The cola slurpee's not working again! I don't want cherry, Grape, or strawberry - Only cola gives me that peace-like zen! 10/30/11

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Date: 6/13/2012 7:24:00 AM
Susan congrats on your win..David
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Date: 6/12/2012 9:13:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Susan! Love, Kim
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Date: 6/12/2012 8:23:00 AM
Congrats on your awesome win Susan... enjoyed your limerick.
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Date: 6/12/2012 7:59:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in SKAT's "Any old or new Limerick" contest Susan. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/11/2012 8:33:00 PM
Congrats, Susan. Outstanding. Great job. Nice going. hugs, Ralph
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Date: 6/11/2012 8:02:00 PM
Congrats, Susan. Excellent. Nice going. Hugs, Ralph
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Date: 6/11/2012 12:57:00 PM
SUSAN... XOX, , CONGRATS WITH YOUR AWESOME LIMERICK IN SKAT'S CONTEST,,, XOX~PD
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Date: 11/3/2011 9:33:00 PM
Yaaaaay, another win for you. Congrats on this scrumptious one!
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Date: 11/3/2011 9:05:00 AM
This is very witty, Susan... hahaha... Congrats on your win :)
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Date: 11/2/2011 10:40:00 PM
good,I can see from a comment below that you won with this one. I think cola slurpee's are GREAT . Better than a diet coke,but with calories (so I don't drink them). I'm calling it a night, susan. Glad I remembered to see one of your poems before going off! Luv,Andrea
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Date: 11/1/2011 3:30:00 PM
Whoowee, yep, I know that feelin'. Bad one for me is when the 'lectricity's flipped on the coffee pot at work and I gotta wait like ten minutes or somethin' before I can brew. Nice write, Susan, grats!namaste~N
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Date: 11/1/2011 5:36:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Francine's "Pick A Beverage, Any Beverage" contest Susan. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/31/2011 4:42:00 PM
LOL I think it's the caffeine kick, Susan. VERY funny limerick. Got a great laugh reading it. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/31/2011 3:02:00 PM
congratulations Susan. Joyce
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Date: 10/31/2011 12:25:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the Pick a Beverage contest Susan. Happy slurpees to you
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Date: 10/31/2011 12:18:00 PM
congrats Susan on your tenth place win in the contest
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Date: 10/30/2011 12:01:00 PM
Yep, works for me x
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Date: 10/30/2011 11:44:00 AM
Amen to that. I love a good frozen Coke. Tony
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