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Cola Slurpees For the Soul

A bad day at the 7-11 The cola slurpee's not working again! I don't want cherry, Grape, or strawberry - Only cola gives me that peace-like zen! 10/30/11

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David Williams

Date: 6/13/2012 7:24:00 AM

Susan congrats on your win..David

Kim Merryman

Date: 6/12/2012 9:13:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Susan! Love, Kim

Jonas L. Rozario

Date: 6/12/2012 8:23:00 AM

Congrats on your awesome win Susan... enjoyed your limerick.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/12/2012 7:59:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in SKAT's "Any old or new Limerick" contest Susan. Love, Carol

Ralph Taylor

Date: 6/11/2012 8:33:00 PM

Congrats, Susan. Outstanding. Great job. Nice going. hugs, Ralph

Ralph Taylor

Date: 6/11/2012 8:02:00 PM

Congrats, Susan. Excellent. Nice going. Hugs, Ralph

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/11/2012 12:57:00 PM

SUSAN... XOX, , CONGRATS WITH YOUR AWESOME LIMERICK IN SKAT'S CONTEST,,, XOX~PD

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/3/2011 9:33:00 PM

Yaaaaay, another win for you. Congrats on this scrumptious one!

Dinda Minardi

Date: 11/3/2011 9:05:00 AM

This is very witty, Susan... hahaha... Congrats on your win :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/2/2011 10:40:00 PM

good,I can see from a comment below that you won with this one. I think cola slurpee's are GREAT . Better than a diet coke,but with calories (so I don't drink them). I'm calling it a night, susan. Glad I remembered to see one of your poems before going off! Luv,Andrea

Nancy Jones

Date: 11/1/2011 3:30:00 PM

Whoowee, yep, I know that feelin'. Bad one for me is when the 'lectricity's flipped on the coffee pot at work and I gotta wait like ten minutes or somethin' before I can brew. Nice write, Susan, grats!namaste~N

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/1/2011 5:36:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Francine's "Pick A Beverage, Any Beverage" contest Susan. Love, Carol